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Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "You Will Come I Wait Some"God, Omnipresent is here, there, everywhere!
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Comment from tfawcus
Some good imagery mixed in with this poem about the beauty of nature, the beauty of family relationships and an implicit acknowledgment that it is all the work of God.
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Some good imagery mixed in with this poem about the beauty of nature, the beauty of family relationships and an implicit acknowledgment that it is all the work of God.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2019
Comment from A. Willow Bends
I am such a fan of the acrostic and your form of it is quite different and lovely. This is done in a soothing manner and very easy to read through, although very different from much of what I have seen. I am sure I reviewed something of yours before and it just takes me a slower reading with your work, but I like the unique, creative way you write. Very nicely done. Good Luck!
Wendy
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I am such a fan of the acrostic and your form of it is quite different and lovely. This is done in a soothing manner and very easy to read through, although very different from much of what I have seen. I am sure I reviewed something of yours before and it just takes me a slower reading with your work, but I like the unique, creative way you write. Very nicely done. Good Luck!
Wendy
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
Comment from l.raven
Hi Al, this so show your true faith and love for God...
it is beautifully written my sweet friend...I was going to write my favorite line...but there were a few of them...a great acrostic poem form...love your poem...and love the artwork...love Linda xxoo
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Hi Al, this so show your true faith and love for God...
it is beautifully written my sweet friend...I was going to write my favorite line...but there were a few of them...a great acrostic poem form...love your poem...and love the artwork...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Alcreator: I can hear your message of walking with God with a soft
drum sound and beat. I like how you repeat land with homeland, flower
land and God's gifted land. We can use God's gifted golden pen and scribe
his words as witnesses. Professor God gives us, blesses us, helps us with
more than we can dream or imagine. God bless, my penpal friend,
flylikeaneagle - nancy
Glad you are having fun writing powerful messages. Well written and more
stars for you! *****************************************
Keep raising your voice.
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Alcreator: I can hear your message of walking with God with a soft
drum sound and beat. I like how you repeat land with homeland, flower
land and God's gifted land. We can use God's gifted golden pen and scribe
his words as witnesses. Professor God gives us, blesses us, helps us with
more than we can dream or imagine. God bless, my penpal friend,
flylikeaneagle - nancy
Glad you are having fun writing powerful messages. Well written and more
stars for you! *****************************************
Keep raising your voice.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Such a lovely acrostic ... it truly is good to read a poem without a whole lot of distracting punctuation that really lets the reader's mind breathe along with the words that are important to it... thank you for sharing! ;) :)
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Such a lovely acrostic ... it truly is good to read a poem without a whole lot of distracting punctuation that really lets the reader's mind breathe along with the words that are important to it... thank you for sharing! ;) :)
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
Comment from ajay53
Your writings are beautiful, simple, elegant, spiritually meaningful and a delight to read. Never stop inspiring us with your work. I thank you so much for sharing.
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Your writings are beautiful, simple, elegant, spiritually meaningful and a delight to read. Never stop inspiring us with your work. I thank you so much for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
Comment from rjuselius
this is n interesting piece of poetry dear alcreator! I can't confess that I understand everything as English is not really my mothertoungue. but I do get the general idea. it is slightly overbearing but to the point.
thank you dear friend for sharing!
blessings and a super squeeze!
Rebekka x
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this is n interesting piece of poetry dear alcreator! I can't confess that I understand everything as English is not really my mothertoungue. but I do get the general idea. it is slightly overbearing but to the point.
thank you dear friend for sharing!
blessings and a super squeeze!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
Comment from Marjorie Burghdoff-Banks
Beautiful poem. I can see nothing that needs improvement. I love the reference to the colors of the sun! Really beautiful poem! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
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Beautiful poem. I can see nothing that needs improvement. I love the reference to the colors of the sun! Really beautiful poem! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
Comment from Mustang Patty
Thank you for sharing your poem - written in your own style.
I didn't realize it was an acrostic until I got to your notes - maybe you could use the Advanced Editor to enhance the first letter of each line - Bold it, make it bigger, etc.
~Mustang Patty~
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Thank you for sharing your poem - written in your own style.
I didn't realize it was an acrostic until I got to your notes - maybe you could use the Advanced Editor to enhance the first letter of each line - Bold it, make it bigger, etc.
~Mustang Patty~
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
Comment from WryWriter
A good acrostic poetic work spelling out the title "You will come I wait some." Utilizing the gifts given until the day we cross Jordan and walk with Him, greeted by those who have gone ahead. Good artwork choice for this theme. Enjoyed!
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A good acrostic poetic work spelling out the title "You will come I wait some." Utilizing the gifts given until the day we cross Jordan and walk with Him, greeted by those who have gone ahead. Good artwork choice for this theme. Enjoyed!
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
