Thunderstorm
a 6-line contest entry13 total reviews
Comment from QC Poet
I count 5 capital letters only, but can discern a gist of the six lines poem needed their here but not too clearly with so many commas here. Likability and flowing great picture you included and topic.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
I count 5 capital letters only, but can discern a gist of the six lines poem needed their here but not too clearly with so many commas here. Likability and flowing great picture you included and topic.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
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Thank you for sharing THUNDERSTORM.
Comment from AdaJulie
Very good format. I am no poetry pro but it seemed to flow exactly as it should with such words, such topic and identifying art. Great work, your are talented.
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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
Very good format. I am no poetry pro but it seemed to flow exactly as it should with such words, such topic and identifying art. Great work, your are talented.
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Comment Written 07-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
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It's fun to try new forms which this prompt allowed me to do. Thank you so much for sharing THUNDERSTORM, Ada.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I heard the crashing thunder and the fearless storm raging in your words and I saw the flashing lightening bolts in this atmospheric piece of writing, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
I heard the crashing thunder and the fearless storm raging in your words and I saw the flashing lightening bolts in this atmospheric piece of writing, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 07-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
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I am delighted I was able to put you there on this stormy night, Dolly. Many thanks for your kind praise of THUNDERSTORM.