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Comment from LisaMay
An interesting poem that I read several times to gain some insight to what you are expressing. I found the first stanza (GOD) very hard to get a grasp of but then I got into the way you express yourself and images and thoughts began to clarify. It sounds like you have had a faithful life and will be welcomed.
I very much liked the reference to "your green gifted land"... it is a privilege to live here, not a right.
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An interesting poem that I read several times to gain some insight to what you are expressing. I found the first stanza (GOD) very hard to get a grasp of but then I got into the way you express yourself and images and thoughts began to clarify. It sounds like you have had a faithful life and will be welcomed.
I very much liked the reference to "your green gifted land"... it is a privilege to live here, not a right.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2019
Comment from Stephanie Launiu
You have written a very moving acrostic poem. The key thoughts I got from reading your poem is "obedience and faith". You don't wait for someone unless you know that they are going to come. Very thought-provoking. Thanks for sharing.
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You have written a very moving acrostic poem. The key thoughts I got from reading your poem is "obedience and faith". You don't wait for someone unless you know that they are going to come. Very thought-provoking. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2019
Comment from QC Poet
Excellent Acrostic work. My that day be long away we Pray. Much work still as in past to be done for his Glory. No point in me looking for errors, read understand and join in Prayers for God's Wisdom.
Thanks for Sharing your Gifts and insight.
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Excellent Acrostic work. My that day be long away we Pray. Much work still as in past to be done for his Glory. No point in me looking for errors, read understand and join in Prayers for God's Wisdom.
Thanks for Sharing your Gifts and insight.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2019
Comment from 24chas
This was an interesting read, Alcreator Litt Dear. I think the acrostic form was the proper one for you to use in this piece. Nice flow and form. Good job on this.
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This was an interesting read, Alcreator Litt Dear. I think the acrostic form was the proper one for you to use in this piece. Nice flow and form. Good job on this.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2019
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It seems sad to think that you are in wait for the inevitable and dwell on such a thought. You can keep God in your heart without dwelling on the ultimate end, love Dolly x
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It seems sad to think that you are in wait for the inevitable and dwell on such a thought. You can keep God in your heart without dwelling on the ultimate end, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Feb-2019
Comment from tbacha58
Works you have performed and done as I find no task left further
As you have lived per my will and have acted for mankind here
I am happy to take you back to our real home above there
To heaven my son let us move and return there'
A deep sad poem, yet so well written with a subject that brought tears to my eyes. Unfortunately, we can do nothing but remember the past. Terry.
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Works you have performed and done as I find no task left further
As you have lived per my will and have acted for mankind here
I am happy to take you back to our real home above there
To heaven my son let us move and return there'
A deep sad poem, yet so well written with a subject that brought tears to my eyes. Unfortunately, we can do nothing but remember the past. Terry.
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Comment Written 07-Feb-2019
