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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Another well written spiritual poem, that glorify's God and your love for Him. This is just a blip in time here on Earth, as I look back, the years went without me realising it. Soon we will all leave here, and go to... we hope to go to that glorious home in Heaven. :) Sandra xx
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Another well written spiritual poem, that glorify's God and your love for Him. This is just a blip in time here on Earth, as I look back, the years went without me realising it. Soon we will all leave here, and go to... we hope to go to that glorious home in Heaven. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
Comment from Liberty Justice
SO BEAUTIFUL and religious. This is a highly spiritual poem meant to bring calmness and peace to someone who might walk with God. It speaks of everlasting life above and tells of a new home. WELL DONE. Read more of mine also. lolol liberty justice
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SO BEAUTIFUL and religious. This is a highly spiritual poem meant to bring calmness and peace to someone who might walk with God. It speaks of everlasting life above and tells of a new home. WELL DONE. Read more of mine also. lolol liberty justice
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
Comment from Jennie Phelps
A very good spiritual read! I thoroughly enjoyed it.
We all wonder when our time will be up here on earth. And how well we've done with this appointed task of life. I know my ears seek to hear the words "well done my good and faithful daughter, time to come home!" Congrats on a great piece!
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A very good spiritual read! I thoroughly enjoyed it.
We all wonder when our time will be up here on earth. And how well we've done with this appointed task of life. I know my ears seek to hear the words "well done my good and faithful daughter, time to come home!" Congrats on a great piece!
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
Comment from Cole King
Great poem. The acrostic message fits the poem extremely well. I have a couple suggestions for the poem. The first line reads a bit clunky. Maybe try "God I will wait for You as only You know what all you have set". It reads a bit more smoothly. Also try "glorious glowing way" in line five. It adds a bit of alliteration.
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Great poem. The acrostic message fits the poem extremely well. I have a couple suggestions for the poem. The first line reads a bit clunky. Maybe try "God I will wait for You as only You know what all you have set". It reads a bit more smoothly. Also try "glorious glowing way" in line five. It adds a bit of alliteration.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
Comment from Boogienights
Interesting...its a whole different way of reading with no punctuation. I like what you say in your poem, it's a well thought out narrative that' held my attention. Thanks for sharing this unique piece.
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Interesting...its a whole different way of reading with no punctuation. I like what you say in your poem, it's a well thought out narrative that' held my attention. Thanks for sharing this unique piece.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
Comment from Sugarray77
I enjoyed reading this Acrostic form that you have penned. I think you have chosen a vivid theme... even though it is waiting, and that can be very hard to do.... Good presentation and photograph!!
Melissa
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I enjoyed reading this Acrostic form that you have penned. I think you have chosen a vivid theme... even though it is waiting, and that can be very hard to do.... Good presentation and photograph!!
Melissa
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
Comment from Dean Kuch
It is so easy to be overwhelmed by despair and fear in the world today. Sin, war, cancer and sickness all find a way to steal our hope and cause us to doubt that there is a good future ahead. Yet God promises us that he has plans for us that are of a good future with hope! Through the power of the Holy Spirit, we are able to look forward with joy to God's destiny on our lives.
God bless
~Dean
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It is so easy to be overwhelmed by despair and fear in the world today. Sin, war, cancer and sickness all find a way to steal our hope and cause us to doubt that there is a good future ahead. Yet God promises us that he has plans for us that are of a good future with hope! Through the power of the Holy Spirit, we are able to look forward with joy to God's destiny on our lives.
God bless
~Dean
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
Comment from misscookie
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem
It is a perfect match
One can see someone in a private place talking to the Father
It capture my attention from the first line to the last
This is a very emotional read.
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
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I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem
It is a perfect match
One can see someone in a private place talking to the Father
It capture my attention from the first line to the last
This is a very emotional read.
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
Comment from Miss Sherry
Glorious statement of faith and gorgeous artwork. Your words reach many and may they touch hearts and remind people what we are here for. I enjoy the punctuation free manner - it lets the mind flow from line to line. Very lovely write!
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Glorious statement of faith and gorgeous artwork. Your words reach many and may they touch hearts and remind people what we are here for. I enjoy the punctuation free manner - it lets the mind flow from line to line. Very lovely write!
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
Comment from LIJ Red
A church member I knew once said that he felt he had been designed for somewhere else, that Earth did not feel right for him. I told him there was a gospel song "I don't feel at Home in This World Anymore." Your poem tells me others
feel the same. Excellent post.
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A church member I knew once said that he felt he had been designed for somewhere else, that Earth did not feel right for him. I told him there was a gospel song "I don't feel at Home in This World Anymore." Your poem tells me others
feel the same. Excellent post.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
