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Comment from robyn corum
Al,
Another interesting acrostic. I was especially amused and pleased at the way you ended almost every line with 'here'. That was a really interesting and unusual way of creating a poem. Thanks!
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Al,
Another interesting acrostic. I was especially amused and pleased at the way you ended almost every line with 'here'. That was a really interesting and unusual way of creating a poem. Thanks!
Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
Comment from angel123
Your spiritual poem is interesting. I think the ending of your first sentence (what for all you set) could be revised to read a little clearer. Your sentences are also a little wordy. But that's just my opinion. I like your message and your artwork choice compliments your message. Best wishes!
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Your spiritual poem is interesting. I think the ending of your first sentence (what for all you set) could be revised to read a little clearer. Your sentences are also a little wordy. But that's just my opinion. I like your message and your artwork choice compliments your message. Best wishes!
Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
Comment from Janet Foor
Hi there Alcreator Litt
I liked the conversational approach to the well written acrostic. Your talk to God and then your hear God talking to you.
A thoughtful and creative approach to the acrostic form.
Well done.
blessings
Janet
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Hi there Alcreator Litt
I liked the conversational approach to the well written acrostic. Your talk to God and then your hear God talking to you.
A thoughtful and creative approach to the acrostic form.
Well done.
blessings
Janet
Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
Comment from Douglas Paul
This is a good follow up to your first poem. I do see the acrostic nature of this poem. YOu seem to have a very strong level of faith, Good for you
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This is a good follow up to your first poem. I do see the acrostic nature of this poem. YOu seem to have a very strong level of faith, Good for you
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Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
Comment from kiwijenny
This is so cool. It sang like a Caribbean beat here.. I loved it. It's very Isaiah
but they who wait for the LORD shall renew their strength; they shall mount up with wings like eagles; they shall run and not be weary; they shall walk and not faint. - Isaiah 40:31
I loved it that it is an acrostic that flows without fault....awesome
God bless
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This is so cool. It sang like a Caribbean beat here.. I loved it. It's very Isaiah
but they who wait for the LORD shall renew their strength; they shall mount up with wings like eagles; they shall run and not be weary; they shall walk and not faint. - Isaiah 40:31
I loved it that it is an acrostic that flows without fault....awesome
God bless
Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
A well-written acrostic poem with a wonderful message about waiting on God to return while doing his work here on Earth. A well-chosen photo to accompany your words. Very inspirational.
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A well-written acrostic poem with a wonderful message about waiting on God to return while doing his work here on Earth. A well-chosen photo to accompany your words. Very inspirational.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
Comment from apky
Good to have you back here again with your inspiring poems, my friend.
I particularly liked the lines:
Works you have performed and done as I find no task left further
As you have lived per my will and have acted for mankind here
I am happy to take you back to our real home above there
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Good to have you back here again with your inspiring poems, my friend.
I particularly liked the lines:
Works you have performed and done as I find no task left further
As you have lived per my will and have acted for mankind here
I am happy to take you back to our real home above there
Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
Comment from TheStoryMan
We all one day will perish and fade away from this earth - we all know that and choose which direction our hearts decide which is right and wrong - once our time has come and we move onto the next world for the very first time in life we will be alone - no mother no father no one at all to guide us from the darkness to the light - scary times - for Satan will come in masses to devert your passage through your path to heaven - you will be tested beyond any comprehension imaginable - far worse then we see here - with no help or guidance but from what you learned on earth - God Bless and thanks for sharing your poem - respectfully Ron
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We all one day will perish and fade away from this earth - we all know that and choose which direction our hearts decide which is right and wrong - once our time has come and we move onto the next world for the very first time in life we will be alone - no mother no father no one at all to guide us from the darkness to the light - scary times - for Satan will come in masses to devert your passage through your path to heaven - you will be tested beyond any comprehension imaginable - far worse then we see here - with no help or guidance but from what you learned on earth - God Bless and thanks for sharing your poem - respectfully Ron
Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
Comment from Jaye Bennett
Waiting for God is what all of us do, whether or not we know it. We wait and listen for God to speak and tell us what He wants us to do. When we have finished our time, we wait for God to take us home. The poet has said "Oh God I Will Wait" very well. Good picture. Good job.
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Waiting for God is what all of us do, whether or not we know it. We wait and listen for God to speak and tell us what He wants us to do. When we have finished our time, we wait for God to take us home. The poet has said "Oh God I Will Wait" very well. Good picture. Good job.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
Comment from A. Willow Bends
This is very unique. I oftentimes do not review religious poetry as I do not feel qualified to comment on it, but I love the acrostic approach. I also enjoy writing punctuation free, so again, this caught my attention. I did have to read it through a couple times. It has a certain "draw" to it and I mean that in a very positive way. It is just unusual, but creative. I like it, the magnetism, the "different" of it. One of the main reasons I have always loved poetry is the freedom it gives the writer to express their thoughts in unusual ways. You did that and it is good! :)
Wendy
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This is very unique. I oftentimes do not review religious poetry as I do not feel qualified to comment on it, but I love the acrostic approach. I also enjoy writing punctuation free, so again, this caught my attention. I did have to read it through a couple times. It has a certain "draw" to it and I mean that in a very positive way. It is just unusual, but creative. I like it, the magnetism, the "different" of it. One of the main reasons I have always loved poetry is the freedom it gives the writer to express their thoughts in unusual ways. You did that and it is good! :)
Wendy
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
