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Comment from Alchera
"I will wait on your white glowing way to my interim stay here
Will wait for you per your will on your gifted land here"
I wish on that day to be with you on the other hand of God with you!
Great Job, my friend! I really like it. I don't like the layout that could have been fixed better (see the second line of the last stanza) and the vertical word written in colours with the picture that is splendid.
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"I will wait on your white glowing way to my interim stay here
Will wait for you per your will on your gifted land here"
I wish on that day to be with you on the other hand of God with you!
Great Job, my friend! I really like it. I don't like the layout that could have been fixed better (see the second line of the last stanza) and the vertical word written in colours with the picture that is splendid.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
Comment from Ogden
Whether here or there, commas or not, you have provided plenty of food for thought, Dr. Alcreator.
Stay safe, and keep up your good work (much needed in these troubled times)!
Don
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Whether here or there, commas or not, you have provided plenty of food for thought, Dr. Alcreator.
Stay safe, and keep up your good work (much needed in these troubled times)!
Don
Comment Written 15-Apr-2020
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is a beautifully written acrostic poem, my friend. Very powerful and inspirational to read this morning. This is certainly a timely poem, my friend. We need faith now more than ever~Debbie
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This is a beautifully written acrostic poem, my friend. Very powerful and inspirational to read this morning. This is certainly a timely poem, my friend. We need faith now more than ever~Debbie
Comment Written 15-Apr-2020
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I think we all have our vision about what heaven and God will look like. I just want to be at peace and know that He served justice to the right people when the time comes. Great job
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I think we all have our vision about what heaven and God will look like. I just want to be at peace and know that He served justice to the right people when the time comes. Great job
Comment Written 14-Apr-2020
Comment from The_Boy_Whodunnit
An interesting poem, and very insightful. I enjoyed it. I'd be interested to know why you went with no punctuation. I think sometimes in poetry it is a matter of choice, but as your lines are long and your sentences run over multiple lines I do think it'd help with the understanding and help the reader.
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An interesting poem, and very insightful. I enjoyed it. I'd be interested to know why you went with no punctuation. I think sometimes in poetry it is a matter of choice, but as your lines are long and your sentences run over multiple lines I do think it'd help with the understanding and help the reader.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2020
Comment from heavenempress
Hi, excellent piece of poetry work. The flow of the work is super by. So powerful confession of faith and patience in words. The image is attractive and the presentation so fantastic. Keep it up!
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Hi, excellent piece of poetry work. The flow of the work is super by. So powerful confession of faith and patience in words. The image is attractive and the presentation so fantastic. Keep it up!
Comment Written 14-Apr-2020
Comment from Patty Palmer
Very well done!! Actually, I didn't even realize that there was no punctuation until I read it in the notes! It flows well,
Good job! Stay safe!
Patty
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Very well done!! Actually, I didn't even realize that there was no punctuation until I read it in the notes! It flows well,
Good job! Stay safe!
Patty
Comment Written 14-Apr-2020
Comment from Fonda Little
My favorite part was, "Will wait for you per your will on your gifted land here", because it shows gratitude, patience, and commitment to do God's Will!
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My favorite part was, "Will wait for you per your will on your gifted land here", because it shows gratitude, patience, and commitment to do God's Will!
Comment Written 13-Apr-2020
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Alcreator Litt Dear,
Nice piece of Spiritual Poetry meeting the desired norms, having smooth flow with lovely rhyming scheme, and beautifully depicting communication between son - the poet - and God.
Picture enhances depth and beauty of the poem.
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Hello Alcreator Litt Dear,
Nice piece of Spiritual Poetry meeting the desired norms, having smooth flow with lovely rhyming scheme, and beautifully depicting communication between son - the poet - and God.
Picture enhances depth and beauty of the poem.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2020
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
O God I Will Wait
by Alcreator Litt Dear
Great acrostic and beautiful imagery. Your well-chosen words resonate truth that you find in faith and in god. Well done my friend.
Stay home, state safe, save lives.
Gypsy
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O God I Will Wait
by Alcreator Litt Dear
Great acrostic and beautiful imagery. Your well-chosen words resonate truth that you find in faith and in god. Well done my friend.
Stay home, state safe, save lives.
Gypsy
Comment Written 13-Apr-2020
