Blow Me a Bubble. . .
Not quite the same in the freezing cold!13 total reviews
Comment from Ms. Snyder
Gray idea and story and contest entry. This is a great format! 7-9-7 was using everything you needed to tell the story. I will have to try sometime. Cheers, Fonda
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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Gray idea and story and contest entry. This is a great format! 7-9-7 was using everything you needed to tell the story. I will have to try sometime. Cheers, Fonda
Comment Written 14-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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A 'gray idea' , eh? :) Next time, I'll shoot for bright pink or something, yeah? ;) :) LOL! I'm guessing you're fingers were as tired as I'm feeling this week! ;) ;) Take care! :) Yvette :)
Comment from Liz O'Neill
What a fun experience you've described here. This activity just might be on my proverbial bucket list. I also saw an interest fb post of apples which rot with ice covering them . They look just like a bubble. Check that out. It's even more if not equally fascinating. You draw the reader in to feel the same way as I have shared. Well chosen and written. I am voting for this one.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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What a fun experience you've described here. This activity just might be on my proverbial bucket list. I also saw an interest fb post of apples which rot with ice covering them . They look just like a bubble. Check that out. It's even more if not equally fascinating. You draw the reader in to feel the same way as I have shared. Well chosen and written. I am voting for this one.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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Thanx so much for your read and review, Liz -- always good to hear from you and Bea! ;) ;)
Comment from sfharper
What a creative treat for adults and children to do in the cold. I always loved blowing bubbles. The use of concrete details help make the experience come clear to readers. I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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What a creative treat for adults and children to do in the cold. I always loved blowing bubbles. The use of concrete details help make the experience come clear to readers. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the read and review, SF -- much appreciated! ;) ;) Have a wonderful week ahead! ;) ;)
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your well-written, concise poem describes a fun activity to entertain young
ones on a very cold day--kind of a combination entertainment and experiment.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
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Your well-written, concise poem describes a fun activity to entertain young
ones on a very cold day--kind of a combination entertainment and experiment.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
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Thank you for your review, Janice - always appreciated! ;)
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I've never tried to blow a bubble in the cold. This is interesting, very interesting. I think that I want to try this out. I have some grandchildren that would probably love this. Thanks for sharing this cute and well written poem. Well done!
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2019
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I've never tried to blow a bubble in the cold. This is interesting, very interesting. I think that I want to try this out. I have some grandchildren that would probably love this. Thanks for sharing this cute and well written poem. Well done!
Comment Written 06-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2019
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Thank you so very much for your wonderful comments, Jeffrey -- please know that they are very much appreciated! :) ;)
Comment from JennaG
Oh wow! This sounds fun! I never thought of doing this in the winter. I'm going to have to try it with my son. He's 11 now, but I think we've still got some bubble stuff around from when he was little. This is a clever entry for the contest. Perfect syllable count and you've created fun imagery with your words. Great job! Good luck in the contest! :)
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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Oh wow! This sounds fun! I never thought of doing this in the winter. I'm going to have to try it with my son. He's 11 now, but I think we've still got some bubble stuff around from when he was little. This is a clever entry for the contest. Perfect syllable count and you've created fun imagery with your words. Great job! Good luck in the contest! :)
Comment Written 06-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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Thank you for your wonderful review, Jenna! :) Much appreciated! :)
Comment from Miss Sherry
Looks like great fun! And no, you wouldn't have to be four...I know someone waaayyy lots older who would love to see that. On t.v. I saw people throwing pans of boiling water off balconies and it froze immediately. Nature is a wonder and when you are homebound by weather, what better to do!
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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Looks like great fun! And no, you wouldn't have to be four...I know someone waaayyy lots older who would love to see that. On t.v. I saw people throwing pans of boiling water off balconies and it froze immediately. Nature is a wonder and when you are homebound by weather, what better to do!
Comment Written 06-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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Thank you for your wonderful review, Sherry! :) Much appreciated! :)
Comment from Stephanie Launiu
A cute poem that is made even better by your author's notes telling readers about your day. How kind to give Missy a break for a while. I live in Hawaii and this will be an experience I probably won't have in this life. But it sure sounds delightful. Your poem meets the requirements for a 7-9-7 and you should do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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A cute poem that is made even better by your author's notes telling readers about your day. How kind to give Missy a break for a while. I live in Hawaii and this will be an experience I probably won't have in this life. But it sure sounds delightful. Your poem meets the requirements for a 7-9-7 and you should do well in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review, Stephanie! :) :)
Comment from Donka Kristeva
Very creative and amusing. Excellent contest entry. Expresses children's emotions and excitement... Words are few but the picture they create is complete. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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Very creative and amusing. Excellent contest entry. Expresses children's emotions and excitement... Words are few but the picture they create is complete. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review, Donka! :) :)
Comment from Jaye Bennett
What an exciting time the little girl must have had getting to not only go outside, but to be able to blow bubbles in the winter when it is cold. Even better to have the bubbles freeze and shatter. Good picture. Good poem. Good job.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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What an exciting time the little girl must have had getting to not only go outside, but to be able to blow bubbles in the winter when it is cold. Even better to have the bubbles freeze and shatter. Good picture. Good poem. Good job.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review, Jaye! :) :)
