New Dishwasher
5-4-3-2-1 Poem on what I hate11 total reviews
Comment from Chris Davies
That was a cute poem! The picture was spot on, too. It's hard to convey much in those few syllables, but you got your point across - good job. Good luck!
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
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That was a cute poem! The picture was spot on, too. It's hard to convey much in those few syllables, but you got your point across - good job. Good luck!
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
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So glad you enjoyed my piece of fluff on the dishwasher!
Comment from Debbie Pope
Absolutely adorable entry. I would hire her in a heartbeat. Cute as can be and cheap to feed. I am assuming that you hate to wash dishes. Me, too. Sometimes I don't want to eat because I know I will have to wash the dish. Pretty bad, huh?
I enjoyed your aversion for sure.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
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Absolutely adorable entry. I would hire her in a heartbeat. Cute as can be and cheap to feed. I am assuming that you hate to wash dishes. Me, too. Sometimes I don't want to eat because I know I will have to wash the dish. Pretty bad, huh?
I enjoyed your aversion for sure.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this light piece of fluff on the dishwasher!
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a very cute entry for the Countdown to Aversion contest. Your photograph is adorable as well as the reference to ice cream cones. Very well done!
Melissa
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
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This is a very cute entry for the Countdown to Aversion contest. Your photograph is adorable as well as the reference to ice cream cones. Very well done!
Melissa
Comment Written 07-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this light piece of fluff on the dishwasher! I really don't like to do dishes...
Comment from Mark D. R.
Very cute and appropriate illustration for your contest restricted verse.
'apply now' is a perfect complement for your syllable count verse and lines
Good luck for your entry.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
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Very cute and appropriate illustration for your contest restricted verse.
'apply now' is a perfect complement for your syllable count verse and lines
Good luck for your entry.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this light piece of fluff on the dishwasher!
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi,
Nice contest entry.
Your poem conforms to the guidelines, and the artwork lends some humor.
Nothing amiss to revise here.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Jan
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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Hi,
Nice contest entry.
Your poem conforms to the guidelines, and the artwork lends some humor.
Nothing amiss to revise here.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Jan
Comment Written 06-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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So glad you liked this little piece of fluff. It was a fun write.
Comment from Stephanie Launiu
What an adorable little kid in the photo to accompany your 5-4-3-2-1 poem. It was clever to communicate your aversion to washing dishes with a job announcement. I hope you do well in the contest!
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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What an adorable little kid in the photo to accompany your 5-4-3-2-1 poem. It was clever to communicate your aversion to washing dishes with a job announcement. I hope you do well in the contest!
Comment Written 06-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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So glad you liked this little piece of fluff. It was a fun write.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL! Don't know what's a bigger smile producer, your wonderful entry or that precious little angel!! :) ;) A fun and delightful offering for the contest! :) ;) Thank you for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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LOL! Don't know what's a bigger smile producer, your wonderful entry or that precious little angel!! :) ;) A fun and delightful offering for the contest! :) ;) Thank you for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 06-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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So glad you enjoyed my piece of fluff. All in good fun!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-I like how you make your
poem like an ad.
-The inclusion of the
ice cream cones is tempting!
-There should be a
lot of applicants.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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-Good image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-I like how you make your
poem like an ad.
-The inclusion of the
ice cream cones is tempting!
-There should be a
lot of applicants.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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I'm glad you enjoyed this bit of fluff. It was all in good fun!
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You are welcome!
Comment from Debra White
Hello :)
Your syllable count is sound and the presentation is cute.
I don't think anyone actually enjoys doing the dishes, but for the promise of all you can eat and ice cream cones, I'll apply for the job!
Good luck in the voting booth :)
Best wishes, Debra
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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Hello :)
Your syllable count is sound and the presentation is cute.
I don't think anyone actually enjoys doing the dishes, but for the promise of all you can eat and ice cream cones, I'll apply for the job!
Good luck in the voting booth :)
Best wishes, Debra
Comment Written 06-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my bit of fluff!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A clever and unique write and you fulfilled this unusual brief here! I laughed and I loved this cute presentation, good luck with the contest, I have one and never use it! Love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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A clever and unique write and you fulfilled this unusual brief here! I laughed and I loved this cute presentation, good luck with the contest, I have one and never use it! Love Dolly x
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Comment Written 06-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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Thanks, Dolly. I really do hate doing dishes! Just having a bit of fun here. Thought the picture was adorable.
