Fashion Debut
5-7-5 contest entry15 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a fabulously inventive write and it is my favourite so far for this contest and I have read quite a few, very descriptive and delightfully frivolous! Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
This is a fabulously inventive write and it is my favourite so far for this contest and I have read quite a few, very descriptive and delightfully frivolous! Love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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I am truly flattered you think FASHION DEBUT is "delightfully frivolous." Many thanks for your very kind praise, Dolly.
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent 5-7-5 poem and entry for the contest
with wonderful imagery of the winter forest
Nice use of alliteration and personification
Excellent picture to match
Well done
Good luck in the voting
RS
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
You've written an excellent 5-7-5 poem and entry for the contest
with wonderful imagery of the winter forest
Nice use of alliteration and personification
Excellent picture to match
Well done
Good luck in the voting
RS
Comment Written 05-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much, RS, for your detailed review and high praise of FASHION DEBUT.
Comment from LovnPeace
This poem is beautiful, cleaver and humorous all in so few words. I matches the lovely picture perfectly also. Good luck in the contest. It's a winner in my book. Blessings, Barbara
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
This poem is beautiful, cleaver and humorous all in so few words. I matches the lovely picture perfectly also. Good luck in the contest. It's a winner in my book. Blessings, Barbara
Comment Written 05-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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Hi Barbara. I am delighted you find FASHION DEBUT to be "beautiful, clever, and humorous." And even more pleased you think it is a winner.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh this is just a lovely offering for this contest -- takes in the beauty that is the wintertime and adorns the topic in beauty!! :) A perfect personification! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! :)
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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
Oh this is just a lovely offering for this contest -- takes in the beauty that is the wintertime and adorns the topic in beauty!! :) A perfect personification! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! :)
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Comment Written 05-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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I am truly delighted you enjoyed the artwork and imagery of my winter scene. Many thanks for your kind praise of FASHION DEBUT.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
I think you did a real good job with this piece. the imagery and personification here are very well-executed. Should do well come the voting I would have thought.
All the best
GMG
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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
Hi there,
I think you did a real good job with this piece. the imagery and personification here are very well-executed. Should do well come the voting I would have thought.
All the best
GMG
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Comment Written 05-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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Hi GMG. I truly appreciate your kind praise of FASHION DEBUT.