Cock Crows
A nonet poetry contest poem21 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I like your nonet because you said so much with so few words Christine! You took me all through the night until dawn with your sweet words, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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I like your nonet because you said so much with so few words Christine! You took me all through the night until dawn with your sweet words, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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Hi Dolly, Thanks for your review for this nonet and I enjoyed wtitong this an trying to get the right shape as well as syllables. Cock a doodle do To you Cheers Christine
Comment from Heather Knight
This is a lovely nonet. And yes, we all wonder what tomorrow will bring.
I particularly like the ideas of stars parking in the sky.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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This is a lovely nonet. And yes, we all wonder what tomorrow will bring.
I particularly like the ideas of stars parking in the sky.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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Hi Maria, Thanks for reviewing my nonet, and glad you liked the stars parking they do always in the same place LOL Cheers Christine
Comment from Gloria ....
Now this is the kind of poem I like a lot. Clear pictures, with a clear message of just exactly what is happening, and it's just so beautiful and filled with insight.
Great job Christine. I wish you great luck with the Contest Committee.
Gloria
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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Now this is the kind of poem I like a lot. Clear pictures, with a clear message of just exactly what is happening, and it's just so beautiful and filled with insight.
Great job Christine. I wish you great luck with the Contest Committee.
Gloria
Comment Written 04-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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Hi Gloria, thanks and lovely to hear from you. I enjoyed trying to get this right and hope the committee like it Cheers for ypir great luck with the committee. ( I may need it as I feel ai may have burnt my bridges with them for previous cheeky posts. ) Never mind I may never win a committe comtest but I will keep trying . Cheers Christine
Comment from BeasPeas
A very nicely composed nonet. I like the theme and the progression of your lines from dark to dawn. Best of all it rhymes. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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A very nicely composed nonet. I like the theme and the progression of your lines from dark to dawn. Best of all it rhymes. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 04-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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Hi Marilyn, Thank you and I enjoyed this nonet trying to get it in the correct shape and still applying correct syllables etc. Cheers Christine Cock a Doodle Do
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is a lovely, well-written nonet. I like the smooth way it flowingly takes
the reader from just before sunset to sunset to starry night to dawn.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019
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This is a lovely, well-written nonet. I like the smooth way it flowingly takes
the reader from just before sunset to sunset to starry night to dawn.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019
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Hi Janice Thank you very much for your kind words and I am pleased this read smoothly sometimes one needs verification to ensure correct format is met Have a lovely day Cheers Christine
Comment from Miss Sherry
This pleased my muse after I looked at the artwork with my glasses and realized it was not a crow...lol I am studying on Nonets and find this is perfect. My last thought at night is the same as yours...what will tomorrow bring. We can never know, just accept and do our best. Very nice gem here!
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019
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This pleased my muse after I looked at the artwork with my glasses and realized it was not a crow...lol I am studying on Nonets and find this is perfect. My last thought at night is the same as yours...what will tomorrow bring. We can never know, just accept and do our best. Very nice gem here!
Comment Written 04-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019
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Hi Wolf Poet Sherry, Thanks for ypur review amd sorry about the image itcwas not supposed to ne the dog but a rooster crowing having trouble trying to get the right image to stay on the right poem so if you care to check again hopefully you will find the correct image selected for this nonet .Yes ai enjoy the challenge of the nonet and this one dame to mind I appreciate your lovely comments Cheers Christine
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Well, the doggie was black - so fit in fine. I will look again though. Loved the verse.
Comment from Sugarray77
What a good and well crafted verse for the Nonet Poetry contest. I would ask why you used a photo of a dog for your artwork when you theme is a setting sun and the night sky? Just wondering?
Melissa
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019
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What a good and well crafted verse for the Nonet Poetry contest. I would ask why you used a photo of a dog for your artwork when you theme is a setting sun and the night sky? Just wondering?
Melissa
Comment Written 04-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019
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Hi Melissa Well may you ask I had a photo of a rooster crowing but my Ipad or this site keeps putting the wrong image onto my work I have to keep checking to see what happens I posted a poem called black dog also today and that had the rooster put onto it so I am trying to rectify these images. It is really annoying especially when you use google images or your won photos and not one from Fan art so sorry I shall have it fixed soon Grrrrrrr but apreciatecyour review Look in again soon Cheers Christine
Comment from SLMorrical
This is a great entry for the contest. I like the picture, because it adds to the poem. This flows very well. It is an easy read to follow. This is very good. Good luck in the contest. Keep writing.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019
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This is a great entry for the contest. I like the picture, because it adds to the poem. This flows very well. It is an easy read to follow. This is very good. Good luck in the contest. Keep writing.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019
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Hi SLMorical. Thank you so much for reaing and reviewing my nonet. Reflecting on the day inspired this one and I am pleased you though it very good Cheers Christine
Comment from lyenochka
Great job with this rhyming nonet, Christine. You covered the progress from evening until the rooster's cry at dawn. I like the idea that stars "park" in the dark night sky.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019
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Great job with this rhyming nonet, Christine. You covered the progress from evening until the rooster's cry at dawn. I like the idea that stars "park" in the dark night sky.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019
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Hi Helen .Thanks and see told you second one today I must be on a roll black dog and all Ha Ha Yes I liked that line too LOL Cheers Christine
Comment from patcelaw
I enjoyed reading this nonet for how you took us from dusk to dawn. Good luck in the contest. Have a blessed evening, Patricia
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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019
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I enjoyed reading this nonet for how you took us from dusk to dawn. Good luck in the contest. Have a blessed evening, Patricia
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Comment Written 04-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019
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Hi Patricia. Thanks so much for reviewing my nonet and for your good luck wishes much appreciated You too have a great day Cheers Christine
