Tanka(wee monkey)
A Tanka poem23 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
HI Pam, I just hope you are feeling better...and will keep healing...God Bless your heart sweet girl...I love monkeys...they are so cute...but I love all animals...I love your poem sweet friend...and love the picture you painted for your 4 years old friend...very nicely done you...and I hope you are here to stay...love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2019
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HI Pam, I just hope you are feeling better...and will keep healing...God Bless your heart sweet girl...I love monkeys...they are so cute...but I love all animals...I love your poem sweet friend...and love the picture you painted for your 4 years old friend...very nicely done you...and I hope you are here to stay...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 23-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2019
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Hugs Linda. You are always so cheerful. Thank you for your wonderful review
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big hugs back at you...and you are so welcome....love you...xxoo
Comment from dragonpoet
Sorry to hear about your ill health. Hope you fully recover soon. This is a cute poem to go with the cute monkey you painted.
Keep writing
Happy Valentine's Day.
Joan
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Sorry to hear about your ill health. Hope you fully recover soon. This is a cute poem to go with the cute monkey you painted.
Keep writing
Happy Valentine's Day.
Joan
Comment Written 14-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Hi Joan. Sorry for the delay. I am recovered from the biggest threat now. Thank you for your lovely review
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Good to hear, You're welcome, Pam.
Joan
Comment from 24chas
This was a good read, Pamusart. It really went well with your artwork. I think you captured the spirit of the monkey. Nice job and keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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This was a good read, Pamusart. It really went well with your artwork. I think you captured the spirit of the monkey. Nice job and keep up the good work.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Thank you 24chas for such a lovely review
Comment from Bill Schott
This tanka, Wee Monkey, looks good and, along with the apt artwork, helps us picture the free and fun-filled creature, playing in the trees.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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This tanka, Wee Monkey, looks good and, along with the apt artwork, helps us picture the free and fun-filled creature, playing in the trees.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Thank you Bill for the great review. Take care
Comment from Michele Harber
Pam, this is a charming description of the tiny monkey in a tree. Your choice of the word "frolics" creates a lovely image of his playfulness, and his grinning brown lips reinforce that image.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Pam, this is a charming description of the tiny monkey in a tree. Your choice of the word "frolics" creates a lovely image of his playfulness, and his grinning brown lips reinforce that image.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Thank you Michelle for your fun and excellent review
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You're welcome as always, Pam.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Tanka about the little monkey clinging for death and life on to the tree branches, and a beautiful artful painting to complement your Tanka perfectly.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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A very well-written Tanka about the little monkey clinging for death and life on to the tree branches, and a beautiful artful painting to complement your Tanka perfectly.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Thank you Sandra for your wonderful review
Comment from jenintorre
Welcome back. Happy New year. Nice to see you back. Hope you are better now. I love your monkey painting, I am sure your little friend appreciated it. Great little descriptive poem to go with it. Take care. Jen. X
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Welcome back. Happy New year. Nice to see you back. Hope you are better now. I love your monkey painting, I am sure your little friend appreciated it. Great little descriptive poem to go with it. Take care. Jen. X
Comment Written 05-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Thank you Jen for your lovely review
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Pam. I hope you're feeling better. Love your poem and cute painting for your little friend. "Akimbo" is such a descriptive word, isn't it? For sure, monkeys are amusing. Marilyn
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Hi Pam. I hope you're feeling better. Love your poem and cute painting for your little friend. "Akimbo" is such a descriptive word, isn't it? For sure, monkeys are amusing. Marilyn
Comment Written 05-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Thank you Marilyn for your lovely review
Comment from Teri7
Pam, It is so good to see you back on here again. I missed you my friend. This is a very cute tanka poem about the wee monkey. You did a cute job with the oil paint too. I am sorry you have been sick. You are in my prayers! love and prayers, Teri
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Pam, It is so good to see you back on here again. I missed you my friend. This is a very cute tanka poem about the wee monkey. You did a cute job with the oil paint too. I am sorry you have been sick. You are in my prayers! love and prayers, Teri
Comment Written 04-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Thank you Teri for your prayers and this lovely review
Comment from meeshu
it is great to see you again, Pam. you really got the monkey's face right, I think it's the eyes. look forward to more of your writing, when you're up to it...........................meeshu
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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it is great to see you again, Pam. you really got the monkey's face right, I think it's the eyes. look forward to more of your writing, when you're up to it...........................meeshu
Comment Written 04-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Thank you meeshu for the wonderful review
