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stars in my heart

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Comment from misscookie
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I enjoyed reading your poem
I found it to be very moving
you captured my attention from the first line to the last.
What pleasant memory's you have
Thank you for sharing
Cookie

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2019

Comment from Treischel
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A well considered personal poetic portrait, done in a Free Verse format that speaks to the elements of your personality. A free-flowing list that colors your personality.
Like a mirror's reflection of truth. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2019

Comment from BeasPeas
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This is a beautifully constructed poem of all good thoughts. I can't see any way to improve it. It's perfect just the way it is. Each one is a gem. Marilyn

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2019

Comment from Sugarray77
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You have written a beautiful verse. I enjoyed reading this eloquent poem of grace and zest for life. It is a wonderful entry for the Free Verse competition... Good luck.

Melissa

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2019

Comment from Donka Kristeva
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A transparent portrait of a life of one of God's beloved daughters. Your words are warm, unconditionally loving, spontaneous, faithful, moving.... They make me think of Jesus promise: "peace I give unto you.. May peace and joy abound richly in you, Nancy.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2019

Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written free verse poem and tribute to our friends and family members that leave earth for heaven and especially our poet friend Michael who are not with us anymore. RIP

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2019

Comment from trimple
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Good afternoon, Flylikeaneagle

Your poem, dedicated to your loving mum, is a list of your loves in life.

It reads quite smoothly.

A couple of things you may or indeed, may not wish to consider.

I teach my daughters
to dedicate their lives
to helping others[, in] [with] love

I sing in praise choirs?-- not sure this reads correctly

I wish you luck in the contest :)

kind regards

tracey









 Comment Written 04-Feb-2019

Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Such a lovely free verse, Nancy -- just perfect! You identify the write as 'stars in your heart' and you proceed to wonderfully list in intimate terms what those stars are...each one set apart from the other...yet together in alignment...just as the real stars in the sky! :) :) Absolutely love it! ;) ;) Thank you for sharing this beautiful creation and the pieces of your heart it reveals! :) Yvette

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2019

Comment from Mustang Patty
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Hi, Nancy,

So difficult to believe that Mikey's life left us so quickly. I'm glad he received the title of Author of the Year - and I hope he was able to enjoy that and realize his efforts hadn't gone unnoticed.

Your poem is wonderful, and a moving tribute to our lost writers and your Mom,

~patty~

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2019

Comment from Chocolate Chip
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I truly enjoyed reading your entry. So PURE & HEARTFELT, I could see myself in EVERY stanza written. BEAUTIFULLY expressive, taking the reader on a visual ride. I felt better after reading this piece. Very nice poem!

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2019