fairy tale
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Comment from Bill Schott
This naani, Fairy Tale, uses four lines and twenty-two syllables to remind us of what a fairy tale is and -- something about rhyme.
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This naani, Fairy Tale, uses four lines and twenty-two syllables to remind us of what a fairy tale is and -- something about rhyme.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2019
Comment from rspoet
This could be an excellent naani poem for the contest
but correct syllables should be between 20-25
and you have eighteen.
Just add a few more (like: there was a fairy tale) and it will be fine
Nice rhyme
Good luck in the contest
RS
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This could be an excellent naani poem for the contest
but correct syllables should be between 20-25
and you have eighteen.
Just add a few more (like: there was a fairy tale) and it will be fine
Nice rhyme
Good luck in the contest
RS
Comment Written 02-Feb-2019
Comment from Kathleen S.
Very simple and yet done well. It sounds like the lady is the fairy tale in need of a rhyme, which probably is a man. So somehow the romance or the budding of the story can actually take place. That's what I got from it any way.
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Very simple and yet done well. It sounds like the lady is the fairy tale in need of a rhyme, which probably is a man. So somehow the romance or the budding of the story can actually take place. That's what I got from it any way.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2019
