World devastation
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Comment from Brett Matthew West
"natures" should be "nature's". So true that man's ignorance is going to cause world devastation. However, man will not learn until it is way too late to prevent the certain future that lies ahead.
reply by the author on 11-May-2019
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"natures" should be "nature's". So true that man's ignorance is going to cause world devastation. However, man will not learn until it is way too late to prevent the certain future that lies ahead.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
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Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is so true! And the artwork is amazing! You say it all in three lines. The line that speaks to me the most is, "surpasses man's ignorance," You're right! It is hard to believe that there are still "climate deniers" among us. Even on Fan Story, let alone, the rest of our country. If you have changed one person's opinion on Climate Change, then you have accomplished something worth being proud of. Thank you for speaking the truth, and sharing it for all to see.
Take care, Jesse
reply by the author on 11-May-2019
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This is so true! And the artwork is amazing! You say it all in three lines. The line that speaks to me the most is, "surpasses man's ignorance," You're right! It is hard to believe that there are still "climate deniers" among us. Even on Fan Story, let alone, the rest of our country. If you have changed one person's opinion on Climate Change, then you have accomplished something worth being proud of. Thank you for speaking the truth, and sharing it for all to see.
Take care, Jesse
Comment Written 04-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 11-May-2019
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Thank you, sorry for the late reply, it is good to be back
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Welcome back.
Jesse
Comment from Cybertron1986
Love the thoughts and acknowledgment of today's issues. We need more of this creative output to fuel the awareness that will impact tomorrow. Much respect. Keep up the quality writing.
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Love the thoughts and acknowledgment of today's issues. We need more of this creative output to fuel the awareness that will impact tomorrow. Much respect. Keep up the quality writing.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2019
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Glad to hear you are back, kahpot!!!
Comment from Miss Sherry
Excellent write. Man is often foolish in his assumptions and one is that the world is infinite. The warning signs are with us. Read about ancient empires that were once mighty and now they are gone. Global warming, air pollution - the possibility of nuclear obliteration. Hopefully we who pae.y attention will be able to die with grace.
reply by the author on 11-May-2019
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Excellent write. Man is often foolish in his assumptions and one is that the world is infinite. The warning signs are with us. Read about ancient empires that were once mighty and now they are gone. Global warming, air pollution - the possibility of nuclear obliteration. Hopefully we who pae.y attention will be able to die with grace.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2019
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Comment from Donka Kristeva
This sounds like a prophetic utterance. The devastation is seen not only in nature disasters but in the invisible world. That of Spirit; and the battle is not "of flesh and blood" Great insight penned in just a few words.
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This sounds like a prophetic utterance. The devastation is seen not only in nature disasters but in the invisible world. That of Spirit; and the battle is not "of flesh and blood" Great insight penned in just a few words.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2019
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Comment from meeshu
a harsh warning and in the nick of time. straightforward and to the point, exactly what Haiku-esque poetry calls for. outstanding, kahpot....................meeshu
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a harsh warning and in the nick of time. straightforward and to the point, exactly what Haiku-esque poetry calls for. outstanding, kahpot....................meeshu
Comment Written 02-Feb-2019
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Comment from June Sargent
How true! We can only ignore the warning signs for so long. Then we pay the consequences. And man is the one who will suffer the most. Well said. Thanks for the reminder.
reply by the author on 11-May-2019
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How true! We can only ignore the warning signs for so long. Then we pay the consequences. And man is the one who will suffer the most. Well said. Thanks for the reminder.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2019
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the world devastation that will come one or other time. Unfortunately, it is not in human power to completely stop or prevent it from happening.
reply by the author on 11-May-2019
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the world devastation that will come one or other time. Unfortunately, it is not in human power to completely stop or prevent it from happening.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2019
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Comment from patcelaw
This 5-7-5 is well written, However, I am not so sure that man will ever devastate this earth as is the claim of many.
Blessings for a good weekend.
Patricia
reply by the author on 11-May-2019
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This 5-7-5 is well written, However, I am not so sure that man will ever devastate this earth as is the claim of many.
Blessings for a good weekend.
Patricia
Comment Written 02-Feb-2019
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Comment from susand3022
Hi Kahpot, I really don't think you could have said it any better than that without making it a double, triple or quadruple stanza poem! Very well said indeed!
reply by the author on 11-May-2019
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Hi Kahpot, I really don't think you could have said it any better than that without making it a double, triple or quadruple stanza poem! Very well said indeed!
Comment Written 02-Feb-2019
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