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Pons and Ned meet at different locations

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Comment from brenda faye curtis
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It's a kick to see Ned get a little friend to add to his comedy routine. I get the impression from the last post that MOWrauder is going to be a permanent fixture, and I think it'll be good.

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2019
    I?ll work him in.
reply by brenda faye curtis on 07-Feb-2019
    Cool! Have a great day, Bill!
Comment from nomi338
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Now that is truly funny. A pig being the butt of jokes. Mowrauder sounds like a handy buddy for a less than bright guy like Ned. I think he may have lucked out in hooking up with Mow.

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
    Pigs are great pets (someone said)
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Bill had so much fun reading your one-scene script scene in an Igloo I have heard that pigs are smart well Mow the pig definitely show of how much value he is so he won't ended up being roasted. Gert

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
    Thanks, Gert.
Comment from Ulla
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Oh dear, so the cold snap has encorage the building of an igloo, Bill. I'm glad Ned found the warmth with his pig bless him. I just spoke with my brother in Massachusetts this morning his time, and it was a wobbling minus 22 celsious. Prrrr!!!
Liked your script as always. Ned and Pons are just too funny. All best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
    That?s 7 degrees F. We are soaring into the thirties next week. Heat wave!
reply by Ulla on 02-Feb-2019
    Hahahaha, yeah I know!!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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An igloo? LOL! Only you, Sir Bill! :) ;) Really got a kick out of this interaction...envision our lovable Ned in one with his pig...:) ;) Well-written and easily followed with that signature Ned&Pons humor entwined -- thanx for sharing! :) :)

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
    Thanks, Yvette
Comment from Earl Corp
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You know th old joke about the pig with a peg leg? Long story short the oig saved the family from a house fire and he told someone the story and the explanation for the peg leg is, " you don't eat a smart pig like that all at once." I can see that happening to Mowrauder. Nice job.

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
    He may be missing some strips of bacon.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
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I love the little igloo Ned and Mowrauder built. That's one talented pig. I'm glad Ned has someone smart enough to take care of him, especially with the extreme cold "global warming" we've had this week. Pig roast? What a terrible thing to say! I'd like Pons' butt on fire myself for that. :)

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
    I hope that igloo was looked at by a state inspector.
Comment from Miss Sherry
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Oh dear, I have missed these strange guys while offline. Was worth the price of a new computer to get back here. I won't even ask what you are imbibing when you write these. Just keep them coming!

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
    Thanks, Sherry
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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I know that one of the hardest tasks for a writer is to properly convey an odd dialect. You did this with aplomb. I could absolutely hear their banter. For myself, personally, though, I thought the content was a little corny, but those who'd tune into watch this would probably love it.

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 Comment Written 01-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
    Thanks, Rachelle
Comment from lyenochka
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But you wouldn't want Mow hamming it up either. I don't get the igloo but it's good that Ned got help building it. I don't know how but like you said, he's a smart pig. Happy Year of the Pig!

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
    I'd give Mow lines, but that would be ridicules.