Thoughts About Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Star Player"My Collection of Love Poetry
7 total reviews
Comment from Badger_29
I gave this one six stars because of the multiple levels of meaning in your writing, I like where you said main squeeze. And as a heart it not only represents love but it seems to me like you could also be talking about the star player being the heart in our body! Enjoyable reading wonderful style and perfect for the occasion.
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Darren
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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I gave this one six stars because of the multiple levels of meaning in your writing, I like where you said main squeeze. And as a heart it not only represents love but it seems to me like you could also be talking about the star player being the heart in our body! Enjoyable reading wonderful style and perfect for the occasion.
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Darren
Comment Written 13-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Hi Darren, thank you so much for your great review and six stars. I?m glad you ?got? the double meaning. It was intended. Your review honors me as a poet.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Debbie Pope
That heart certainly is the main player in the game of life. It is a good team player. It works so well with all of the other organs in the body. And like you say, it does not like emotional change. Love and harsh words affect its rhythm.
You got it right. I think that you did a fine job with your club entry.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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That heart certainly is the main player in the game of life. It is a good team player. It works so well with all of the other organs in the body. And like you say, it does not like emotional change. Love and harsh words affect its rhythm.
You got it right. I think that you did a fine job with your club entry.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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I wonder just how many physical illnesses are caused by emotional distresses. I lot I would imagine. I had fun writing this with a different theme. Thanks for your positive review
Hugs,Trisha
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
Your title is very captivating, "Star Player!" I love it. What a great response for your Pix This Challenge on the heart. Your line "pumps energy into the game" jumped out at me, as did, "embellished by positive acts." Well-written!
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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Your title is very captivating, "Star Player!" I love it. What a great response for your Pix This Challenge on the heart. Your line "pumps energy into the game" jumped out at me, as did, "embellished by positive acts." Well-written!
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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I?m glad you enjoyed the poem. Thank you for your complimentary review
Hugs,Trisha
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow - such a wonderful write that extols the beauty and the strength of our heart and our hearts ... you've done masterfully well with this one, Trish -- great job! :) ;) Your phrasings and word choices within this ekphrasic offering really bring home the strength of yours! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
From coaches fear, --> From coaches' fear,
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Wow - such a wonderful write that extols the beauty and the strength of our heart and our hearts ... you've done masterfully well with this one, Trish -- great job! :) ;) Your phrasings and word choices within this ekphrasic offering really bring home the strength of yours! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
From coaches fear, --> From coaches' fear,
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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It was interesting to think about the heart other than for Valentine?s Day.
Thanks for your positive review
Hugs,Trisha
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about the sportsmanship spirit of a star player and what can help continue the stand of being; well said, well done. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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This speaks about the sportsmanship spirit of a star player and what can help continue the stand of being; well said, well done. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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I?m glad you enjoyed the poem. Thank you for your complimentary review
Hugs,Trisha
Comment from Pam (respa)
-The image is a good one.
-I like your idea of the
star player being the heart,
and comparing it to a sport:
"This is the star player in the game of life"
"Pushes the players on team red"
-The inclusion of the coaches is good,
and I like the conclusion.
-Very well done, Trisha, thanks
for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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-The image is a good one.
-I like your idea of the
star player being the heart,
and comparing it to a sport:
"This is the star player in the game of life"
"Pushes the players on team red"
-The inclusion of the coaches is good,
and I like the conclusion.
-Very well done, Trisha, thanks
for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much, Pam! Your experience in penning makes your review an honor. I am glad you enjoyed the poem
Hugs,Trisha
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You are very welcome, Trisha, and thank you so much for the lovely compliment. I enjoy thinking about things and sharing ideas in my reviews. It's nice to know they are appreciated.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I so agree with your words Trisha and this is an ideal poem for Vanlentine's day, the heart is the key player in all our pursuits! Without heart and love we are nothing. We many associated emotions but it boils down to having a good heart, a poignant write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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I so agree with your words Trisha and this is an ideal poem for Vanlentine's day, the heart is the key player in all our pursuits! Without heart and love we are nothing. We many associated emotions but it boils down to having a good heart, a poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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I appreciate your kind review.. I think in western medicine there is divide, whereas complimentary eastern follows the whole body-mind connection
Hugs,Trisha
