Be Wee With Bea
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "A Good Laugh"An allegory in the Winnie the Pooh genre
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Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, now this is just precious! :) Not only does Bea learn a few things, but I have to chuckle at the end there!! :) A wonderful addition to our fun Bea adventures -- thank you so very much for sharing, Liz! :) ;) Yvette
I've included a few grammatical catches below, feel free to employ or ignore as you like. :) :)
She making sure --> She made sure
tell, Scruffles --> tell Scruffles
As we know she --> As we know, she
later part of --> later, part of
wondered also if --> also wondered if
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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Oh, now this is just precious! :) Not only does Bea learn a few things, but I have to chuckle at the end there!! :) A wonderful addition to our fun Bea adventures -- thank you so very much for sharing, Liz! :) ;) Yvette
I've included a few grammatical catches below, feel free to employ or ignore as you like. :) :)
She making sure --> She made sure
tell, Scruffles --> tell Scruffles
As we know she --> As we know, she
later part of --> later, part of
wondered also if --> also wondered if
Comment Written 31-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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Thank you for your comprehensive review. I'm glad you are enjoying it. As usual, I have copied your suggestions and will check them out.
Comment from BeasPeas
i enjoyed reading this chapter of your story. So charming as always. I got a giggle throughout. I like this line and other names for teaching lines:
"fixing them some " be good to themselves" treat -- fish -- which she caught in her favorite fishing spot."
Marilyn
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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i enjoyed reading this chapter of your story. So charming as always. I got a giggle throughout. I like this line and other names for teaching lines:
"fixing them some " be good to themselves" treat -- fish -- which she caught in her favorite fishing spot."
Marilyn
Comment Written 31-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. I'm so glad you are enjoying Bea.
Comment from lyenochka
Interesting reference to "Ozzie and Harriet." It seems that Bea is always learning something new and she seems to be able to share all the good things she learns and encourages friends to heal through joy.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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Interesting reference to "Ozzie and Harriet." It seems that Bea is always learning something new and she seems to be able to share all the good things she learns and encourages friends to heal through joy.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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I am so pleased that you enjoyed this chapter. Thank you for your positive review. Ironically, that actually happened with my cat and a neighborhood cat. The owner actually corrected me about the names. I must have made the switch in my mind. So I thought it would be fun to put it in the story.
Comment from Ulla
Awe, isn't this just too sweet. Nothing can compare with cats. I adore them. You've written an adorable little story. I loved every word of it. well I take it is about cats, right? But it could readily be humans as well. All best. Ulla)))
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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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Awe, isn't this just too sweet. Nothing can compare with cats. I adore them. You've written an adorable little story. I loved every word of it. well I take it is about cats, right? But it could readily be humans as well. All best. Ulla)))
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Comment Written 31-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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Thank you for your enthusiastic review. I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. It is actually an autobiographical allegory about the adventures and growth of Bea the wee Bea who represents me. If you check out chap 1,3 & 7 you would get a sense of the story and how healing it can be.
