Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

Hi Eileen.
You too have too many of them.
But grandson and cats equals?
Nicely Scripted and Cast.
Good flow and no grammar issues.
Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excedescriptive.
Ricky...

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

I'm not a guinea pig fancier, but Yeti is pretty. Don't tell her I said so, or she'll get even more conceited. I think most animals are like that about food. My cats know they're going to get treats at a certain time during the day, and they're on the alert. Yeti really wants her food when she wants it. It would be fun to see them chowing down on those veggies. Great work with your rhyme. judi

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019

All of my animals know when it is time for food. The guinea pigs are quite fascinating, they have a unique language. Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine

reply by judiverse on 10-Feb-2019

You're very welcome. My cats eat dry cat food, so they more or less help themselves. They know when it's time for their treats, though. judi

Comment from Aussie

Excellent

Did you mean "YOU gorgeous sow?" reference to owner? When I saw The Queen I immediately thought of Queen Elizabeth! Yes, animals rule our lives. If I am on the computer and Toby-dog wants attention, he will look up and bark at me, " get off that computer, " says he! Love the photo of The Queen, not Lizzie though LOL.

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019

Thanks for reading and enjoying. All of my animals rule my life. I had a cat who use to sit on the computer when I was on it. Elaine

reply by Aussie on 10-Feb-2019

I had a cat that sat on the bathroom sink while I cleaned my teeth. He loved to watch the water go down the drain!

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

Nice work up for your poem love your guinea pig my daughter had one shed call him, and he wouldn't come, so I made their noise, and he came running ever time

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019

Thanks for reading and enjoying. Guinea pigs are very intelligent. Elaine

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-That is quite a picture, Elaine.
-Thanks for the notes.
-I like how you characterize
Yeti as a queen who expects
service and attention.
-The the rhyme is good,
and I like the humor in the piece:
"my beauty radiates as my subjects bow."
-Thanks for sharing.

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 Comment Written 31-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019

Love your review. Thanks so much. Elaine

reply by Pam (respa) on 10-Feb-2019

You are very welcome, Elaine.

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

This is a very fine piece of writing. It has a wonderful cadence and pace. I love the rhymes in the couplets. 'feed the pig!' Well done, Elaine.................meeshu

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 Comment Written 31-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019

Thanks for a great review. Elaine