Comment from Cybertron1986

Excellent

A very deep portrayal of the timeless definition that is "love." This perspective is well presented in an obscure, but inviting voice that creates a creative ring to it. Very well enjoyed.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019

Thank you for such a thoughtful and encouraging review. The thoughts began rising in my mind when I read a posted passage on the FB that said-'Love is an original design of creation'. My poem came forth from there. Please view collection of my poems in my portfolio titled, 'Random Reflections'.It is under my name-Arun Potdar. Best wishes and regards.
Arun

Comment from Jaye Bennett

Excellent

What an amazing idea to put forth. One line follows another to extend the knowledge of how it works when we allow our egos and greed to "blur" the mirror.
Non-rhyming, but it isn't needed. This is more of a prose poem that says it all. Good job.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019

Jaye:
Thanks for your encouraging ratings. The poem spawned from a FB posting of a statement related to the original design of humanity which the philosopher claimed to be Love. I did not make attempts to rhyme because it was interfering with the thoughts emerging in my head. Please visit my collection of poem in my portfolio titled, "Random Reflections." My best wishes and regards.
Arun

reply by Jaye Bennett on 30-Jan-2019

Darn good reason to forget about rhyming. Like I said, it wasn't needed. I've found some poems do much better when we just write them instead of constructing them. I'll try to check out "Random Reflections."

reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019

Thanks a lot. It is in my portfolio under my name-Arun Potdar.

reply by Jaye Bennett on 30-Jan-2019

Thank you. I probably won't have a chance until day after tomorrow. I have to be out of town tomorrow. I'm looking forward to reading your work.

reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019

Take your time and thanks for the support.