Baker's Dozen
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Revelations"Ben Baker has to hunt down and kill twelve people
17 total reviews
Comment from BethShelby
If they need killing machines why not use robots. It seems that is all this poor guy is anyway. He has no control at all. I guess all those soldier he just slaughtered are collateral damage. I hope your story has it worked out so he will be able to kill Conner. Now you have me rooting for someone to die.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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If they need killing machines why not use robots. It seems that is all this poor guy is anyway. He has no control at all. I guess all those soldier he just slaughtered are collateral damage. I hope your story has it worked out so he will be able to kill Conner. Now you have me rooting for someone to die.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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Coming up.
Comment from JSD
Another great instalment. Great sounding and authentic, intriguing dialogue and the usual exciting dramatic action. I continue to enjoy this immensely. Thanks.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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Another great instalment. Great sounding and authentic, intriguing dialogue and the usual exciting dramatic action. I continue to enjoy this immensely. Thanks.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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Thank you, John. Ends coming up.
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Thank you, John
Comment from Ulla
Wow, Bill, I never read this but I'm sure glad I now have. What a great chapter that is. Full of action, I dare say, but also giving us some background.story. great stuff. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2023
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Wow, Bill, I never read this but I'm sure glad I now have. What a great chapter that is. Full of action, I dare say, but also giving us some background.story. great stuff. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 11-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2023
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Thank you, Ulla. One more chapter.
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I'll be looking forward to it:)))
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Weirder and weirder. just when I get a clear bead on it, you shift it again. but, I still somehow keep up.
You write like a demon. And I will keep reading. Isn't it time to meet Abracadaver the magician?
Karen
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2023
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Weirder and weirder. just when I get a clear bead on it, you shift it again. but, I still somehow keep up.
You write like a demon. And I will keep reading. Isn't it time to meet Abracadaver the magician?
Karen
Comment Written 11-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2023
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I do not know him. Oh wait, he is over there in a pile of bodies.
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Maybe he wasn't that good a magician, he could only make part of himself disappear?:-)
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
First, Happy Veteran's Day tomorrow! Pretty intense, Bill, and thanks for your service!
A very intense chapter, Bill, but I guess most of these are. It started with talking, and ended with a great deal of action! So, the music set off Bobby, either with hypnotism or a brain implant.
Take care,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
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First, Happy Veteran's Day tomorrow! Pretty intense, Bill, and thanks for your service!
A very intense chapter, Bill, but I guess most of these are. It started with talking, and ended with a great deal of action! So, the music set off Bobby, either with hypnotism or a brain implant.
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment Written 10-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
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I?m going with Manchurian candidate level brainwashing.
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Ahhhhh, I see!
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I?m going with Manchurian candidate level brainwashing.
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Nice!
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Yes. Whammer Jammer by J Geils Band.
Comment from jim vecchio
This outstanding piece of writing has so much going for it along with the realism you have imbued within it and the top notch dialogue, my infinitesimal small brain doesn't know where to begin, so let me just say you have a real winner here and someday I'll make the effort to read each installment in order.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
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This outstanding piece of writing has so much going for it along with the realism you have imbued within it and the top notch dialogue, my infinitesimal small brain doesn't know where to begin, so let me just say you have a real winner here and someday I'll make the effort to read each installment in order.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
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Thank you, Jim, for your kind and enthusiastic review. Bill
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When you write these things, I know it comes from experience mingled with creativity.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Goodness me, I feel so sorry for Baker, fancy finding out about himself and his father that way. Conner has a lot to answer for, and I'm hoping he will, and soon. What about Baker's mother? He must have had one.
I'm back to it again. Off to read the next part. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2021
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Goodness me, I feel so sorry for Baker, fancy finding out about himself and his father that way. Conner has a lot to answer for, and I'm hoping he will, and soon. What about Baker's mother? He must have had one.
I'm back to it again. Off to read the next part. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 14-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2021
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Thank you, Sandra for pressing on through the story.
Comment from nomi338
This should be fun. How do you neutralize dogs without revealing your exact location? Can you get away in time to be ready for those following the dogs? You'd better be better than good, quicker than quick, and just about the best shot ever. Oh, and plug your ears so that you do not hear the verbal command that would shut you down. Surprize, surprise.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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This should be fun. How do you neutralize dogs without revealing your exact location? Can you get away in time to be ready for those following the dogs? You'd better be better than good, quicker than quick, and just about the best shot ever. Oh, and plug your ears so that you do not hear the verbal command that would shut you down. Surprize, surprise.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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Hope he makes it.
Comment from brenda faye curtis
Ok, now a lot of the last few chapters make more sense. I can see how these people are connected, and that makes the story, for me, a whole lot better. I am, as always, looking forward to the next installment!
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
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Ok, now a lot of the last few chapters make more sense. I can see how these people are connected, and that makes the story, for me, a whole lot better. I am, as always, looking forward to the next installment!
Comment Written 30-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
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Thank you, Brenda
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You're welcome, Bill
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Another great additon, but, wow! Family ties as well ... certainly did not see that coming (should I have - sorry, if so!!). And now dogs?!! Oh, my goodness! Kinda hate when they bring the animals in as animals have no free will and will obey masters...people on the other hand, even assassins....hmm. :) ;) Thanx for sharing, Sir Bill! :) Yvette
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
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Another great additon, but, wow! Family ties as well ... certainly did not see that coming (should I have - sorry, if so!!). And now dogs?!! Oh, my goodness! Kinda hate when they bring the animals in as animals have no free will and will obey masters...people on the other hand, even assassins....hmm. :) ;) Thanx for sharing, Sir Bill! :) Yvette
Comment Written 30-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
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Thank you, Yvette, for giving this a look. Bill
