Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I am glad you enjoyed the challenge and I did not miss the "s's"! I enjoyed the vivid picture of the fox and the moral to the story. You made the Lipogram seem easy to write, when it is not. Best wishes in the contest- Joan

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2019

Thanks for your time to review my work.

Comment from Cindy McIntyre

Excellent

What a very challenging poetic style. Writing this lipogram cannot be easy. I am glad in your author's notes that you said it was the "s" that you omitted. Amazing. You've also told quite the poem/story with your words. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019

Thanks for your fine review.

Comment from brenda faye curtis

Excellent

This is good advice for any sneaky old fox (and I couldn't reply without an "s") ! I'd never heard of a lipogram, until I read yours, and I see it can be quite a challenge. Well done!

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019

Thanks for your fine review.

reply by brenda faye curtis on 05-Feb-2019

You're welcome.

Comment from Mistydawn

Excellent

This is a cute poem a fun little read. Very well-written, interesting. Your artwork is perfect, love the evil look on the fox's face. I bet it was a challange to write a poem without any s in it.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019

Thanks for your fine review.

Comment from Treischel

Excellent

I bet that writing this Lipogram was much harder than one would think. You did it well here about a fox that got killed stealing chickens by a farmer with a gun. A good warning. I wonder if all foxes can read. Lol.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019

Thank you for your lovely review.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Well, I'm not for killing foxes or anything else, BUT your poem is a gem and without the letter "s." I like the image and your poem is a good example of a well-written lipogram. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019

Thanks for the review.

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem
It is a perfect match
It is sad but, the farmer had to do what he had to do to safe his turkey on the farm.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019

Thanks for the review.

reply by misscookie on 31-Jan-2019

Your very welcome, have a blessed day.
Cookie

Comment from Heather Knight

Excellent

I had never heard the word lipogram before so I had to look it up and then I saw your note saying you hadn't used letter s.
Very interesting. Quite a challenge. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019

Thanks for the review. The form was a bit of a challenge.

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Hi Patricia. You did a very good job on crafting a lipogram.... and especially without using the lettr.. s.. good job. A great entry for the contest... I wish you good luck.

Melissa

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019

Thanks for the review.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

They will never learn as it is in their blood to go after the turkeys! He he he, they are cunning and they will have another plan up their sleeve! I enjoyed your Lipogram Patricia,l love Dolly x

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019

Thanks for the review.