Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

Mental illness plays many a role in how our mind works, depression is the worst battle on fights against on a daily basis

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2019

Comment from kiwisteveh

Excellent

Updated review.

Missing line issue all fixed. Rating upgraded. Thought-provoking piece.

Original review.

Hi, Miranda.

This is a strong poem theme-wise and well-expressed, BUT you have missed out one line (the 6-syllable one)

Easy mistake to make but you will want to fix it before this hits the booth. Let me know when you do and I will adjust my rating.

Steve

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019

ok. i fixed it :)

reply by kiwisteveh on 28-Jan-2019

... and I fixed my rating! :O)

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I so agree and mental illness challenges so many people these days, I enjoyed your nonet, good luck with the contest, best wishes. . . . . love Dolly x

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2019

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a good nonet for the contest and has a good message. May your week be blessed with wonderful peace, joy and love. Patricia

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2019