This Time - That Time 3
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Tommy To The Rescue"Third book in the time travel trilogy
41 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
Good job, Sandra, on this continuation of your story of Veronica, Mildred and Tom. You did a great job writing about the vivid, and furious conditions they faced after the bombing. It all made sense and was very believable. Well done.
Melissa
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
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Good job, Sandra, on this continuation of your story of Veronica, Mildred and Tom. You did a great job writing about the vivid, and furious conditions they faced after the bombing. It all made sense and was very believable. Well done.
Melissa
Comment Written 30-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
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That is a terrific review, Melissa, thank you so very much! :)) Big hugs, Sandra xx
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What an intense chapter full of imagery you have written, Sandra. I was engaged from start to finish to find out what was happening. You did a great job detailing the events, the people, the bombing, and the aftermath. This is one of your best works for this book. Great job and thanks for sharing. Jan
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What an intense chapter full of imagery you have written, Sandra. I was engaged from start to finish to find out what was happening. You did a great job detailing the events, the people, the bombing, and the aftermath. This is one of your best works for this book. Great job and thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 30-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much, Jan, what a lovely thing to say. I really appreciate your words. :)) Big hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment from wordsfromsue
A terrific chapter, my dear. Totally absorbing and terrifying!
Two possible corrections:
a malevolent roar from above ripped at (is 'at' the right word? Ripped 'into', ripped 'through') my ears and had me bending over her in a futile attempt to offer protection.
Although it couldn't burn me, I instinctively jumped out (of) the way of the blazing fire.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
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A terrific chapter, my dear. Totally absorbing and terrifying!
Two possible corrections:
a malevolent roar from above ripped at (is 'at' the right word? Ripped 'into', ripped 'through') my ears and had me bending over her in a futile attempt to offer protection.
Although it couldn't burn me, I instinctively jumped out (of) the way of the blazing fire.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
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Thank you so very much for another lovely review and another 6 stars!! I'll change 'at' to 'through' and I'll put the 'of' in that sentence. I think you always pick me up on that, it's just the way I speak! LOL. Big hugs, my friend. xxx :) xx
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Sandra, I can see I've been missing out not following this story, but what I have just read - after your last chapter was a cliff-hanger that left us wanting to know what was going to happen - then we got the answer and what a vibrant, powerful chapter. Great descriptive piece of writing, exciting - but you've done it again. Just when we think everything is working out and people are all safe, you leave us wondering!!! This is well calculated and it takes clever writing to leave the reader on edge wondering 'what next', at the end of each episode. You are simply oozing creativity. Very well done. Warm regards Dorothy xxx
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
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Hi Sandra, I can see I've been missing out not following this story, but what I have just read - after your last chapter was a cliff-hanger that left us wanting to know what was going to happen - then we got the answer and what a vibrant, powerful chapter. Great descriptive piece of writing, exciting - but you've done it again. Just when we think everything is working out and people are all safe, you leave us wondering!!! This is well calculated and it takes clever writing to leave the reader on edge wondering 'what next', at the end of each episode. You are simply oozing creativity. Very well done. Warm regards Dorothy xxx
Comment Written 30-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
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Bless your heart, thank you so much, Dorothy, for the lovely 6 stars, and this very complimentary review!! The main reason veronica has been sent back, is still to be sorted, so there's quite a bit to go yet. I've had a few new readers so I think I'd better put a small synopsis on here, it'll make reading this easier. I'm so pleased you've got into it, that's brilliant. Chat later, I want to hear if you have any more news. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from l.raven
Hi Sandra, Ok!!!...I'm sitting here...and it's 11:55 pm...now it's 12:00 o'clock am...and now it's 12:05 am...and I'm just waiting for you to finish...oh!!!!...I just fell asleep...still waiting...you have got to quit stopping like this...I got a whiplash...now...what's not good news???....there'a no way out????...great...the Zeppelin's may not kill us...but the time travelers will...ok!!! every one start singing...kumbaya my lord....kumbaya...anyway...I'm so glad Mildred survived...and everyone was safe...now lets see how they are going to get out...always a wonderful story told my wonderful sweet friend...and must say...it holds your interest till the last drop...very well written you amazing writer you...love you so many bunches...Linda xxoo
Kristy said Noah is looking forward to me reading him the rest of the story...
and I hope and pray all is well for Ian...and Sarah......and you and Graham...take care...much love...
was -34 wind chill last time I checked here...going to be sitting on my heating pad in a minute....burrrrrrr...tomorrow will be -56 below wind chill...if I had stayed in Florida...it would be in the 40's....LOL...xxoo
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
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Hi Sandra, Ok!!!...I'm sitting here...and it's 11:55 pm...now it's 12:00 o'clock am...and now it's 12:05 am...and I'm just waiting for you to finish...oh!!!!...I just fell asleep...still waiting...you have got to quit stopping like this...I got a whiplash...now...what's not good news???....there'a no way out????...great...the Zeppelin's may not kill us...but the time travelers will...ok!!! every one start singing...kumbaya my lord....kumbaya...anyway...I'm so glad Mildred survived...and everyone was safe...now lets see how they are going to get out...always a wonderful story told my wonderful sweet friend...and must say...it holds your interest till the last drop...very well written you amazing writer you...love you so many bunches...Linda xxoo
Kristy said Noah is looking forward to me reading him the rest of the story...
and I hope and pray all is well for Ian...and Sarah......and you and Graham...take care...much love...
was -34 wind chill last time I checked here...going to be sitting on my heating pad in a minute....burrrrrrr...tomorrow will be -56 below wind chill...if I had stayed in Florida...it would be in the 40's....LOL...xxoo
Comment Written 30-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
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If I was you, I'd be hot-footing it off to Florida today!! -56??!!?? I'd die!!
You had me laughing my socks off with the whiplash! LOL, :))!! And to top it off, you are the second reviewer to start singing, Tony Fawcus is singing, Rock of Ages, Cleft For Me!! LOL! You're both mad! But I love you! Thank you so much for the 6stars and this super funny review. Love you load, my friend. Big hugs, :)) Sandra xx
Are you going up to see Noah again. soon? Give him a cuddle from me when you do.
Sarah is doing fine, building herself up for the next major op. Ian is having more tests on his heart and liver. But both are still smiling. Bless them. Thanks for asking, my dear friend. Another hug zooming over! :)) Sandra xxxxx
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that's to funny...Tony is a sweetheart...LOL...and you sweet person are awesome...smiling so big back at you...so much Love you...xxoo
it well be awhile before I get back down...but I will get there...LOL...
they are both in my prayers...I know God is with them...big hugs zooming back at you...xxoo
Comment from Mistydawn
I'm so glad everyone is alright, not so glad about the bad news. The poor ladies never seem to get a break. Darn powers that be. It's well-written very interesting, suspensful had me on the edge of my seat.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
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I'm so glad everyone is alright, not so glad about the bad news. The poor ladies never seem to get a break. Darn powers that be. It's well-written very interesting, suspensful had me on the edge of my seat.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much for this lovely six stars, Misty, I'm so pleased you enjoyed this part. Big hugs, :)) Sandra xx
Comment from aryr
Oh my more suspense. What lays at the end of the tunnel? What is their future? Sandra you did fantastic with this chapter. I knew that Mildred would not die, because she just couldn't do so. I liked that you remembered about the lad's father's watch, that was an important touch. You provided great descriptions about all the various activities that went on. Fantastic. Hugs and smiles.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
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Oh my more suspense. What lays at the end of the tunnel? What is their future? Sandra you did fantastic with this chapter. I knew that Mildred would not die, because she just couldn't do so. I liked that you remembered about the lad's father's watch, that was an important touch. You provided great descriptions about all the various activities that went on. Fantastic. Hugs and smiles.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
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Well, they can't see the light yet, that's for sure! lol. Yes, the watch was important, after all, it nearly got Mildred killed. Not that she minded at all going to get it for him. Thank you so much for this lovely review, Alie, I really appreciate you. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
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You are most welcome Sandra
Comment from Treischel
Wow! Supreme drama as the roof is crashing down.
The backdraft is an added horror. So good she is a spirit and can't be harmed, but her anger is another fine touch.
The descriptions of the chaos in the tunnel are very convincing.
As usual, you very adeptly leave us hanging on a new concern. Excellent chapter!
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
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Wow! Supreme drama as the roof is crashing down.
The backdraft is an added horror. So good she is a spirit and can't be harmed, but her anger is another fine touch.
The descriptions of the chaos in the tunnel are very convincing.
As usual, you very adeptly leave us hanging on a new concern. Excellent chapter!
Comment Written 29-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
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What a lovely review, Tom, you've finished my day with a big smile. Thank you also for the 6 star award, the is doubly kind of you, my friend. Big hugs, Sandra. xxx :)
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Sandra,
This book is much, much darker than the previous two books. I also suspect Veronica is truly getting tired of the 'powers that be.'
As always, you do a wonderful job of creating tension and excitement. Looking forward to reading more,
~patty~
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
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Hi, Sandra,
This book is much, much darker than the previous two books. I also suspect Veronica is truly getting tired of the 'powers that be.'
As always, you do a wonderful job of creating tension and excitement. Looking forward to reading more,
~patty~
Comment Written 29-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
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I didn't mean it to be, but my characters have a will of their own!! lol. Thank you so much, Patty, for another lovely review, Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Teresa Alford
Very good story. It has just the right amount of action to be interesting without dominating the story. Very well written. Thanks for sharing. Teresa ":~)
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
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Very good story. It has just the right amount of action to be interesting without dominating the story. Very well written. Thanks for sharing. Teresa ":~)
Comment Written 29-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much for reading my story and the lovely review. I really appreciate it, :)) Sandra x
