Gun For Hire
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Hungry Reb"First the war...the marshal
3 total reviews
Comment from country ranch writer
Yep, its best to stay close to the barn and wait while Jeb is out making sure the coast is clear. Can't take the chance of being over run.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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Yep, its best to stay close to the barn and wait while Jeb is out making sure the coast is clear. Can't take the chance of being over run.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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Thank you for the excellent rating and your comments. Catherin
Comment from Bill Pinder
I enjoyed reading your writing. You seem to have a good handle on That niche. It is easy to picture the characters in that real life situation during the Civil War. I look forward to reading more of your writing.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2019
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I enjoyed reading your writing. You seem to have a good handle on That niche. It is easy to picture the characters in that real life situation during the Civil War. I look forward to reading more of your writing.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2019
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Bill, thank you for your excellent rating and your kind words. Catherin
Comment from JTStone
I love the way you write in era and situation character. The story has a very real feel to it, which I both like and admire.
The realism of the poverty stricken times, civil war era, as well as the hope for a better tomorrow are well done.
The narrative character who starts the story confuses me a bit. I assume the first person voice that starts the dialog is Jake. Then there are parts where Jake is a third person character... then back to first person narrative in the last paragraph.
It could be me.
Still, a very cool peice.
JT
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2019
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I love the way you write in era and situation character. The story has a very real feel to it, which I both like and admire.
The realism of the poverty stricken times, civil war era, as well as the hope for a better tomorrow are well done.
The narrative character who starts the story confuses me a bit. I assume the first person voice that starts the dialog is Jake. Then there are parts where Jake is a third person character... then back to first person narrative in the last paragraph.
It could be me.
Still, a very cool peice.
JT
Comment Written 26-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2019
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Thank you, JT, for your excellent rating and your kind words. Thank you for you constructive comments. Catherin
