I Sat On The Sofa
free verse, story in a poem10 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written free verse story/poem about sitting on the sofa, watching TV and craving something to eat and the itching ear make you go to the shop buying ear swabs to clean out the wax inside your ear.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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A very well-written free verse story/poem about sitting on the sofa, watching TV and craving something to eat and the itching ear make you go to the shop buying ear swabs to clean out the wax inside your ear.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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Hi Sandra! You must be doing great. You're so sharp. Thank you :)
Comment from Treischel
Hi Alicia. I just had to smile at your little Q-tip tale. You took such a mundane topic and spun it into an adventure. Somehow, now, I'm craving some cinnamon, and my ear is twitching.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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Hi Alicia. I just had to smile at your little Q-tip tale. You took such a mundane topic and spun it into an adventure. Somehow, now, I'm craving some cinnamon, and my ear is twitching.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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Thank you. Hugs :)
Comment from country ranch writer
Be careful with cotton swabs you need to be careful not to push the wax further in side. Good to hear from you wondered why I hadn't heard from you.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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Be careful with cotton swabs you need to be careful not to push the wax further in side. Good to hear from you wondered why I hadn't heard from you.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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Hi Barb! Thank you. Hugs :)
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. I hope that itch in the ear cleared up! I find that using Q-tips in my ears cause itching now. From the picture, I was thinking the poem would be about "caramel dipped marshmallows."
Hope all's going well, Alicia! Glad to see you post again.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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Lol. I hope that itch in the ear cleared up! I find that using Q-tips in my ears cause itching now. From the picture, I was thinking the poem would be about "caramel dipped marshmallows."
Hope all's going well, Alicia! Glad to see you post again.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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Hi! Thank you :)
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
Ha,ha! Cotton swabs and ear wax! This is sOOO you, Alicia! You had me laughing with your comparison of cotton swabs and ear wax to marshmallows and melted caramel. Your free verse poem is so very original. You always think outside of the box, and I know that I'm in for a treat of something quite different when I read your work. "But I forgot the coffee stuff" ... priceless!
Hugs,
Connie
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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Ha,ha! Cotton swabs and ear wax! This is sOOO you, Alicia! You had me laughing with your comparison of cotton swabs and ear wax to marshmallows and melted caramel. Your free verse poem is so very original. You always think outside of the box, and I know that I'm in for a treat of something quite different when I read your work. "But I forgot the coffee stuff" ... priceless!
Hugs,
Connie
Comment Written 26-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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HI Connie. You're the best. Thank you. Hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from royowen
What a lovely quirky post Alicia. Defining waxing one's ears with dipping into caramel dips boggles the mind, it truly does, heh heh. This is very quaint, very entertaining and very readable my friend,welcome back again, well done, blessjngs, Roy
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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What a lovely quirky post Alicia. Defining waxing one's ears with dipping into caramel dips boggles the mind, it truly does, heh heh. This is very quaint, very entertaining and very readable my friend,welcome back again, well done, blessjngs, Roy
Comment Written 26-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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Hi Roy! Thank you. God bless you. Hugs :)
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Most welcome
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Alicia. Well, well... you got me going there. All rev'd up for something good to eat and what am I left with... ear wax. Oh yuk! I prefer the caramel marshmallows. Still, you managed to incorporate your chosen topic into this free verse poem. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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Hi Alicia. Well, well... you got me going there. All rev'd up for something good to eat and what am I left with... ear wax. Oh yuk! I prefer the caramel marshmallows. Still, you managed to incorporate your chosen topic into this free verse poem. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 26-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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Hi! Thank you. Hearts & hugs :)
Comment from Joan E.
Welcome back--it was great to see your name pop up before my leaving for the rest of the day. Thank you for telling your story in free verse, and I could relate since my body creates a good deal of earwax! (I use the inexpensive, little, twisty device that I have even seen at the 99 Cent Store for $2.99.) I certainly enjoyed your positive thought about being "delicious"! Big smiles- Joan
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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Welcome back--it was great to see your name pop up before my leaving for the rest of the day. Thank you for telling your story in free verse, and I could relate since my body creates a good deal of earwax! (I use the inexpensive, little, twisty device that I have even seen at the 99 Cent Store for $2.99.) I certainly enjoyed your positive thought about being "delicious"! Big smiles- Joan
Comment Written 26-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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Hi Joan! You're nice. Thank you. Hearts & hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from meeshu
You have created some great images here, and your writing is thoughtful and descriptive. this is a very creative and comical write, Sunni..................meeshu
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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You have created some great images here, and your writing is thoughtful and descriptive. this is a very creative and comical write, Sunni..................meeshu
Comment Written 26-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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Hi! Thank you :)
Comment from Brigitte Elko
This certainly was different. The subject matter quite clever. It was a fun read because I didn't know where it was going until the end. very funny and the picture, hilarious when viewed with your words.
Have a great day!
Brigitte
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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This certainly was different. The subject matter quite clever. It was a fun read because I didn't know where it was going until the end. very funny and the picture, hilarious when viewed with your words.
Have a great day!
Brigitte
Comment Written 26-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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hi! thank you :)
