-Lovers�??�?�¢?? Dream-
Romance2 total reviews
Comment from 24chas
Nice read. Love the fourth line. Great image. Only a couple of things you may want to consider. The word "destinies" should be destiny's. Also, the last sentence probably needs to be broken up to keep a rhythm going.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019
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Nice read. Love the fourth line. Great image. Only a couple of things you may want to consider. The word "destinies" should be destiny's. Also, the last sentence probably needs to be broken up to keep a rhythm going.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019
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Thank you ever so much for pointing those errors out to me. Many blessings.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Lover's Dream, is an expressive allusion to the power and magnificence of the sea and its awesome ability to push and wash and reach its goal. I feel you step from that theme when you take the reader from the watery alliances to another, less tangible understanding of one's connection with another. Happy day.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019
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This poem, Lover's Dream, is an expressive allusion to the power and magnificence of the sea and its awesome ability to push and wash and reach its goal. I feel you step from that theme when you take the reader from the watery alliances to another, less tangible understanding of one's connection with another. Happy day.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019
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What great review skills you have. I do appreciate your input. Many blessings.
