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8 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Birds of the Antelope Valley Air, enters with the seemingly common interest in birds, but we find it's jets that are admired so very much. Neat.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2019
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This poem, Birds of the Antelope Valley Air, enters with the seemingly common interest in birds, but we find it's jets that are admired so very much. Neat.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2019
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Thank you for the review,
Both are beautiful, sleek and unique.
My tribute to Aerospace Workers (my previous work history) and USAF (My grandson is in the Air Force) As were many of the parts I worked on.
God Bless you and your family.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written rhyming poem about the birds flying over your home every day, that interests you and you like to see them come and go, where I live there is seldom such birds flying around except a few locals that are having such birds flying over on occassion.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2019
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A very well-written rhyming poem about the birds flying over your home every day, that interests you and you like to see them come and go, where I live there is seldom such birds flying around except a few locals that are having such birds flying over on occassion.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2019
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It's my metaphorical tribute to Aerospace Workers, and USAF
I was one, and my grandson is in the USAF
God Bless you and Thank You for your review.
Comment from Commando
A commendable presentation in the "Commentary and Philosophy Poetry" category, George! I read your profile--a "Salute!" Certainly, hope your health issues are flying off into the "Wild Blue Yonder." Welcome back to FanStory and God Bless.
Respectfully, Bill.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019
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A commendable presentation in the "Commentary and Philosophy Poetry" category, George! I read your profile--a "Salute!" Certainly, hope your health issues are flying off into the "Wild Blue Yonder." Welcome back to FanStory and God Bless.
Respectfully, Bill.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019
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Thank you Sir.Bill,
Still Learning and Yearing.
God Bless you!
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Learning and yearning--aren't we all? I thank you, my dear friend. God Bless you. Bill
Comment from Donka Kristeva
That write expressed well the poet's fascination and admiration of different kind of birds. The poem is very descriptive, its words and unique style gives a sense of freedom.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019
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That write expressed well the poet's fascination and admiration of different kind of birds. The poem is very descriptive, its words and unique style gives a sense of freedom.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019
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Thank you for the review and encouragement yes I'm learning poetry types and try to put my odd observations on subjects of my curiosity and interest.
God Bless you and your family.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
You wish to be a bird and fly like birds in the sky and wish to enjoy life as you have seen some birds of the Antelope Valley Air, more than birds; well said, well done. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019
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You wish to be a bird and fly like birds in the sky and wish to enjoy life as you have seen some birds of the Antelope Valley Air, more than birds; well said, well done. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 25-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019
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Oddly enough one of 2 Nick names I'm known by is Lil Crow. Thank you for the review.
Comment from Debbie Pope
I like this poem, and I am not quite sure why. I think that your last line did it to me, particularly the words "salute" and "worry." Your respect for and love of those airmen is touching.
You express your feelings so well. Your rhyme scheme is excellent and your words heartfelt. Good job.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019
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I like this poem, and I am not quite sure why. I think that your last line did it to me, particularly the words "salute" and "worry." Your respect for and love of those airmen is touching.
You express your feelings so well. Your rhyme scheme is excellent and your words heartfelt. Good job.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019
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My metaphorical comparison, My Grandson is in USAF, I worked for Both Manufacturers of the planes used,
God Bless you and your family
Thanks for the review.
Comment from meeshu
Your writing is smooth and the language is colorful. I enjoyed reading this writing so much. one does get a sense of pride watching those 'birds' Very well done, George........................meeshu
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019
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Your writing is smooth and the language is colorful. I enjoyed reading this writing so much. one does get a sense of pride watching those 'birds' Very well done, George........................meeshu
Comment Written 25-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019
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My metaphorical tribute to USAF (Grandson) and fellow ExAerospace Workers.
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a salute to them.
Comment from country ranch writer
We sit and watch the planes on a daily basis here just to have something to do. I nicknamed them sky people for they leave the vapor trails in the sky. Nice picture for your poem.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2019
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We sit and watch the planes on a daily basis here just to have something to do. I nicknamed them sky people for they leave the vapor trails in the sky. Nice picture for your poem.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2019
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Thank you kindly for the review and positive encouragement.
in my younger year made some of the components.
God Bless you
