Playing Fiddle
A new Old Country song.32 total reviews
Comment from Teresa Alford
You poem is well-writen and I enjoyed rading it. It's flow and topic are good. It keeps he reader's attention. Keep on writing. I would llike to read more. TA ":~)
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You poem is well-writen and I enjoyed rading it. It's flow and topic are good. It keeps he reader's attention. Keep on writing. I would llike to read more. TA ":~)
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Comment Written 22-Jan-2019
Comment from jmshumate
This is a cleverly written poem, country song. This has some nice rhyme lines to it and you give the reader a good story line. I think most people have had some kind of experience or known somebody who got there butts kicked by the girl who fiddled around. I like your last line, it is a very good closer for this. Thank you for sharing.
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This is a cleverly written poem, country song. This has some nice rhyme lines to it and you give the reader a good story line. I think most people have had some kind of experience or known somebody who got there butts kicked by the girl who fiddled around. I like your last line, it is a very good closer for this. Thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 22-Jan-2019
