Playing Fiddle
A new Old Country song.32 total reviews
Comment from TheStoryMan
Fiddlin another word for flirtin - in that ole country bar down the way - square dancin with another - just ain't right I say ! - a well done poem on cheatin - I enjoyed it - well done - respectfully Ron
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Fiddlin another word for flirtin - in that ole country bar down the way - square dancin with another - just ain't right I say ! - a well done poem on cheatin - I enjoyed it - well done - respectfully Ron
Comment Written 26-Jan-2019
Comment from Christine C Autry
This was very good. I like all about this poem. It rhymed and I like that. Interesting till the end and a little humorous too. Thanks for sharing.
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This was very good. I like all about this poem. It rhymed and I like that. Interesting till the end and a little humorous too. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2019
Comment from royowen
Well done, an excellent folksy and lyrically about the eternal struggle of love and perfidious infedelity. A beautufully expressive poem, with the ambiguous "fiddling" as being the central adjective to the narrative. Well done, a most worthy work, blessings, Roy
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Well done, an excellent folksy and lyrically about the eternal struggle of love and perfidious infedelity. A beautufully expressive poem, with the ambiguous "fiddling" as being the central adjective to the narrative. Well done, a most worthy work, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 25-Jan-2019
Comment from Boogienights
This is a great country song ,maybe...Dierks Bentley could sing it( I really like him). Very nicely done, I could just hear the music playing. I always wanted to write a song like this, I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.
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This is a great country song ,maybe...Dierks Bentley could sing it( I really like him). Very nicely done, I could just hear the music playing. I always wanted to write a song like this, I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2019
Comment from Kathleen S.
Sad intriguing poem with a south western kind of twist, that speaks of a relationship that has gone asunder and may of all, but gone through nasty weather. (Yes, I think that last bit rhymed.) Your poem's imagery has almost like watching it on television. Interesting to read.
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Sad intriguing poem with a south western kind of twist, that speaks of a relationship that has gone asunder and may of all, but gone through nasty weather. (Yes, I think that last bit rhymed.) Your poem's imagery has almost like watching it on television. Interesting to read.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2019
Comment from Brigitte Elko
This poem made me want to move my beat, it had a terrific beat when read aloud.
Great job and love the ending.
One slight flaw noticed: Its a muscle I ... need to insert a contraction spelling, It's
Well fiddled out poem.
Have a great day!
Brigitte
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This poem made me want to move my beat, it had a terrific beat when read aloud.
Great job and love the ending.
One slight flaw noticed: Its a muscle I ... need to insert a contraction spelling, It's
Well fiddled out poem.
Have a great day!
Brigitte
Comment Written 25-Jan-2019
Comment from Blue Hendrix
Very laid back with an easy flow and great word choices as well as good imagery and subject matter. I think you did a wonderful job with this one. Thanks for sharing with us today.
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Very laid back with an easy flow and great word choices as well as good imagery and subject matter. I think you did a wonderful job with this one. Thanks for sharing with us today.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2019
Comment from gramag4
Such a descriptive poem. So quickly, "the story" is told; over and over again on the same stools. Life seems to fiddle with us! Thanks for sharing!
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Such a descriptive poem. So quickly, "the story" is told; over and over again on the same stools. Life seems to fiddle with us! Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 24-Jan-2019
Comment from Oatmeal
CLOCKWISE,
The flow was good. The theme was excellent! Your descriptive words were well chosen. Your arrangement here is very creative. Your words were very understandable and comprehensible. The art looked very nice.
There was no SPAG. No typos. No homophones. No problems at all.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
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CLOCKWISE,
The flow was good. The theme was excellent! Your descriptive words were well chosen. Your arrangement here is very creative. Your words were very understandable and comprehensible. The art looked very nice.
There was no SPAG. No typos. No homophones. No problems at all.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 24-Jan-2019
Comment from Gert sherwood
Smiles Clockwise
I must say I had a foot stomping fun with fiddling poem along with your clueless riddles wondering what was under the dress. Gert
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Smiles Clockwise
I must say I had a foot stomping fun with fiddling poem along with your clueless riddles wondering what was under the dress. Gert
Comment Written 24-Jan-2019
