Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

A good descriptive write of continuous war and it's effect on both men and women.
Our healed hurts become open sores
And welcoming homes close their doors
I think those two lines, for me, sum it up nicely.
Well written Duodecatain,
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2019

Thanks or reading and reviewing, valda. Glad you liked it.

Joan

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello
You did well with this Club entry for the "Duodecatain format. I liked how you brought up how for some reason have the feeling they need to fight is true,
Thank you for telling me how the format works, Gert

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2019

Thank you for the review and the high rating

Joan

reply by Gert sherwood on 23-Jan-2019

You are dragonpoet Gert

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Hello.... you had me at the first line.... Human beings fight too much.... So much in that one verse. You go on to produce valid arguments to support your statement. So well done.

Melissa

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2019

Thanks for the encouraging comments and the high rating, Melissa.

Joan

Comment from Yuna Akil

Excellent

I enjoyed your poem.

America is a warring nation and it holds its integrity by holding on to an ideology that idolatrizes war. This is true no matter what party on is in.

It is refreshing to read something that criticizes that ideology.

Cheers!

Yuna.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2019

Thanks, Yuna, for reading and review this poem. I appreciate the comments

Joan