Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi, Melissa,

This is a wonderful ABC poem. The words you've used are strong and take us through the shadows, fog, mists, and eddies. The artwork went very well with the piece.

I wish you well in the contest,

~patty~

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2019

Thanks a lot, Patty... just trying my hand, again, at this form. It is more difficult than it seems..

All the best.

Melissa

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

The wicked truth can thwart our days if we let it. Every cloud has a silver lining as they say and you poem is uplifting and victoriously living in the moment, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 22-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2019

Thanks, Dolly. I knew you would get it... I really appreciate your comments and review.

Melissa

Comment from June Sargent

Excellent

How easy it is to hide from reality by pushing it away the shadows dancing in our minds. Works for awhile, but they just keep on resurfacing. Very unique abc poem that is full of truth. Well done.

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 Comment Written 22-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2019

Thank you, June... I always value your comments and opinion. Thanks a bunch.

Melissa