Comment from jmshumate

Excellent

This is a very humorous poem. You really tell a good story in this. A clever plan of escape but it looks like it's not going to work out well for him/ her. You have a nice flow and rhyme to this. It really reminds me of a long lymerich style poem. Good job on this unique write and thank you for sharing this.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2019

Thanks, jm

Comment from Teresa Alford

Excellent

A cleverly worded poem. It makes one laugh, which is a good way to end the day. Although, I plan to not end my day as yet but to keep on reading. Write On! TA ";~)

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 Comment Written 22-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2019

Thanks, TA

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Interesting story, Bill. I'm guessing she was just a transvestite and didn't need surgery to return to previous self? But seems her friends like her as a "she." Great storytelling in rhyming aaab quatrains.

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 Comment Written 22-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2019

The biology was all a farce, of course.