Favorite Short Stories, Vol. 3
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "A Murder of Crows, Part 1"an eclectic fiction collection, old and new
9 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
Ouch--that's quite a conclusion to chapter one! I think the old Indian is onto something. I like the idea of the crows being an omen, and the picture you selected certainly reinforces it. I have a hunch that James will get his comeuppance. Smiles- Joan
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Ouch--that's quite a conclusion to chapter one! I think the old Indian is onto something. I like the idea of the crows being an omen, and the picture you selected certainly reinforces it. I have a hunch that James will get his comeuppance. Smiles- Joan
Comment Written 23-Jan-2019
Comment from Gloria ....
Excellent introduction to a most suspense filled short story. The conflict is taking shape, as are the characters and of course a murder of crows often portends something ominous.
Looking forward to where you take us with your fine story telling here. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2019
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Excellent introduction to a most suspense filled short story. The conflict is taking shape, as are the characters and of course a murder of crows often portends something ominous.
Looking forward to where you take us with your fine story telling here. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 22-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much, Gloria. Your encouragement means the world! I've finished part 2 and will post it tonight. :))
Comment from GWinterwin
Good first chapter to this story. Sounds like it could get interesting and with your writing capabilities I know it will. Who knows which way the story will turn, well I wouldn't make any attempt to guess. Thanks for sharing, God bless and have a beautiful day.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2019
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Good first chapter to this story. Sounds like it could get interesting and with your writing capabilities I know it will. Who knows which way the story will turn, well I wouldn't make any attempt to guess. Thanks for sharing, God bless and have a beautiful day.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2019
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Oh George, you're wonderful! Thank you! I have finished part 2 and will post it tonight. :)
Comment from country ranch writer
Oh! Dear now what is going to happen she burnt her hands in the water is he going to have to do the chores if, so he is going to have a kitten fit that's for sure.
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Oh! Dear now what is going to happen she burnt her hands in the water is he going to have to do the chores if, so he is going to have a kitten fit that's for sure.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2019
Comment from damommy
Poor crows. They get the blame for everything, even curses. It appears Bea's life is going to be full of strange things happening, and she believes it's because the Indian sent crows.
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Poor crows. They get the blame for everything, even curses. It appears Bea's life is going to be full of strange things happening, and she believes it's because the Indian sent crows.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2019
Comment from Y. M. Roger
oh, dear, the curse of the murder of crows...I've often marveled at the different ways groups of animals are labeled, but murder of crows has got to be one of the most unsettling. ;) ;) So, we have Bea and Jim who have lost each other some where along the way and Bea whose upset the spirits with her failure to apologize...maybe...:) ;) I'm likin' it so far! :) Thanx for sharing, Dawn, look forward to more! :) Yvette :)
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oh, dear, the curse of the murder of crows...I've often marveled at the different ways groups of animals are labeled, but murder of crows has got to be one of the most unsettling. ;) ;) So, we have Bea and Jim who have lost each other some where along the way and Bea whose upset the spirits with her failure to apologize...maybe...:) ;) I'm likin' it so far! :) Thanx for sharing, Dawn, look forward to more! :) Yvette :)
Comment Written 22-Jan-2019
Comment from BeasPeas
Well, you got me right off the bat with "Bea" and "Beatrice," my mother's name and the reason for the beaspeas. Image is striking. Your writing is descriptive and interesting. I'm not sure where you are going with this yet. That will be determined as we go along. Marilyn
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Well, you got me right off the bat with "Bea" and "Beatrice," my mother's name and the reason for the beaspeas. Image is striking. Your writing is descriptive and interesting. I'm not sure where you are going with this yet. That will be determined as we go along. Marilyn
Comment Written 22-Jan-2019
Comment from Miss Sherry
Another pot-boiler (pun intended) and another wait for the next episode. I am part Native American and can't wait to see what happens. Crows are harbingers of doom - so we will see. Love to read your work.
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Another pot-boiler (pun intended) and another wait for the next episode. I am part Native American and can't wait to see what happens. Crows are harbingers of doom - so we will see. Love to read your work.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2019
Comment from meeshu
You have created some great images here, Dawn. Your writing is thoughtful and descriptive, this looks like it is going to be a pleasure to read............meeshu
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You have created some great images here, Dawn. Your writing is thoughtful and descriptive, this looks like it is going to be a pleasure to read............meeshu
Comment Written 21-Jan-2019
