When I Am With You
Love Poem Poetry Contest27 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written short love poem. The most important thing a lover likes to know is that we like to be in their company and they are the only one that ever matters in our lives.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2019
A very well-written short love poem. The most important thing a lover likes to know is that we like to be in their company and they are the only one that ever matters in our lives.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2019
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Hi SAndra, I appreciate your comments and review.
Melissa
Comment from LisaMay
Oh that is so true... you have captured the essence of real love. We can feel frayed at the edges personally, or cast out to live uncertainly in less than ideal situations, but when you are with the one you love, and who loves you back ("our love") then that is definitely "all that matters".
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2019
Oh that is so true... you have captured the essence of real love. We can feel frayed at the edges personally, or cast out to live uncertainly in less than ideal situations, but when you are with the one you love, and who loves you back ("our love") then that is definitely "all that matters".
Comment Written 22-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2019
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Hi, LisaMay... yes, that is what is meant by this poem. I really appreciate your review.
Melissa
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Mistydawn
This a sweet little love poem. One I'm sure many can relate to. Your so right life isn't always easy but love will get us through it. It's well-written, very interesting and your artwork is perfect. Good luck with your contest.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2019
This a sweet little love poem. One I'm sure many can relate to. Your so right life isn't always easy but love will get us through it. It's well-written, very interesting and your artwork is perfect. Good luck with your contest.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2019
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Thank you, Misty.
all the best,
Melissa
Comment from Dean Kuch
Love is the emotion that makes the world go around, right, Melissa?
I suppose it's that way for most.
I really wouldn't know myself.
I know this, however.
This poem is short, sweet, and gets right to the heart of the matter.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2019
Love is the emotion that makes the world go around, right, Melissa?
I suppose it's that way for most.
I really wouldn't know myself.
I know this, however.
This poem is short, sweet, and gets right to the heart of the matter.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2019
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Thanks a lot, Dean. Yes, love is wonderful!!
Melissa
Comment from Teresa Alford
That is a very nice poem. It makes me say "AH" and warms my heart. It is amazing what love can do! I hope you have an amazing evening! TA ";-)
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2019
That is a very nice poem. It makes me say "AH" and warms my heart. It is amazing what love can do! I hope you have an amazing evening! TA ";-)
Comment Written 21-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2019
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Thanks a lot, Teresa, for the wonderful review. This verse does give me an ahhhh moment too. Love matters.
Melissa
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Melissa,
Oh goodness! This five line love poem is incredibly realistic and will resonate with many individuals I have known. It is also affirming that in spite of living "on rough edges," love will see these individuals through their challenges. Wise words for today!
Thank you and best wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2019
Hello Melissa,
Oh goodness! This five line love poem is incredibly realistic and will resonate with many individuals I have known. It is also affirming that in spite of living "on rough edges," love will see these individuals through their challenges. Wise words for today!
Thank you and best wishes!
diane
Comment Written 21-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2019
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Hi, Diane.... thanks a bunch. Love is in all of our hearts now matter what our background is and for those who have had it hard... when they love... they are all in. Or so it seems to me...
Thanks.
Melissa
Comment from Irish Rain
Well. I love the words, of course, especially the simply stated...'Life has not been kind'...but I ADORE that picture.
Such a wonderful match for your poem, a simple heart resting on a lonely branch.
Wonderful entry!
Blessings...
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
Well. I love the words, of course, especially the simply stated...'Life has not been kind'...but I ADORE that picture.
Such a wonderful match for your poem, a simple heart resting on a lonely branch.
Wonderful entry!
Blessings...
Comment Written 21-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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Thanks, Judy. So many people have heartbreaks and rough lives... I was kind of thinking of them. When they love... they are all in....
Melissa
Comment from Miss Sherry
Bless your heart. Love heals us and smoothes those rough edges enough to tolerate life. The artwork you chose is so apt and makes the verse even sweeter. May your love live forever and ever be strong, dear one.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
Bless your heart. Love heals us and smoothes those rough edges enough to tolerate life. The artwork you chose is so apt and makes the verse even sweeter. May your love live forever and ever be strong, dear one.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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Thanks so much, Sherry!
Melissa
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Melissa,
Such a beautiful love poem - it is wonderful when the person who makes you feel safe and happy is the person you are in love with. I know I treasure each and every day with my hubby,
Thank you for sharing,
~patty~
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
Hi, Melissa,
Such a beautiful love poem - it is wonderful when the person who makes you feel safe and happy is the person you are in love with. I know I treasure each and every day with my hubby,
Thank you for sharing,
~patty~
Comment Written 21-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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I am delighted that you like this poem. Much appreciated.
Melissa
Comment from kahpot
You have said so much in so few words when true love exists though, not many words are needed, an excellent and beautiful love poem, very well written and best wishes for your competition****kahpot
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
You have said so much in so few words when true love exists though, not many words are needed, an excellent and beautiful love poem, very well written and best wishes for your competition****kahpot
Comment Written 21-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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Thanks so very much, kahpot. I appreciate your comments and review.