Catzilla in Love
Son of Catzilla is love struck.25 total reviews
Comment from Carola Fernandez
Creative entry. Interesting and funny at the same time. I really like the title. I just wanted to mention that there may be a couple of typos - "ne made" - did you mean "be"? and "A genius though" (did you mean "thought"?... perhaps?
Best of luck with your writing piece.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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Creative entry. Interesting and funny at the same time. I really like the title. I just wanted to mention that there may be a couple of typos - "ne made" - did you mean "be"? and "A genius though" (did you mean "thought"?... perhaps?
Best of luck with your writing piece.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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Thank you for the excellent review and critique. I fixed thought. I am a blind writer and need good readers like you to catch what I miss. Me ol? blind eyes! I am so pleased you stopped by and enjoyed my story.
All my best,
Sal :+)
Comment from Debbie Pope
Your attitude toward life makes me feel good, Sally. Of course, I enjoyed Junior's exploits, but what pleased me the most was your paragraph on why Junior's owner was hired (is that you, by the way?)
"He had hired me immediately when I told him I could type as well as make coffee, be nice and sweep off the front entryway." That's just plain funny, and oh so true. As you say in a subsequent paragraph, such tasks may be demeaning, but they are what small offices need. Why not be kind and do what is needed? What's the big deal? This is your attitude. Mine as well.
Thanks for throwing that aside into your story. I enjoyed it. Hope to read more stories about those babies.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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Your attitude toward life makes me feel good, Sally. Of course, I enjoyed Junior's exploits, but what pleased me the most was your paragraph on why Junior's owner was hired (is that you, by the way?)
"He had hired me immediately when I told him I could type as well as make coffee, be nice and sweep off the front entryway." That's just plain funny, and oh so true. As you say in a subsequent paragraph, such tasks may be demeaning, but they are what small offices need. Why not be kind and do what is needed? What's the big deal? This is your attitude. Mine as well.
Thanks for throwing that aside into your story. I enjoyed it. Hope to read more stories about those babies.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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I am so glad you enjoyed my most recent Catzilla saga. Yes, that is really me. I worked for the elderly gentleman for almost a year. Several of the secretaries and recently fired receptionist refused to do the simplest tasks. He was just the nicest man in the world. Very...grandfatherly and a true southern gentleman. He really was a farmer and brought me produce regularly. Thank you for stopping by with the excellent review and kind words.
All my best,
Sal :+)
Comment from LovnPeace
LOL What a wonderful and uplifting story. Much needed on this day. I have no special reason for needing uplifting, but it is always welcome. Well done. Very well written. Blessings, Barbara
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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LOL What a wonderful and uplifting story. Much needed on this day. I have no special reason for needing uplifting, but it is always welcome. Well done. Very well written. Blessings, Barbara
Comment Written 21-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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So glad you liked my lastest installment of my Catzilla series. If you have time, catch up with them by accessing my portfolio. So glad to always bring a smile and laughter.
All my best,
Sal :+)
Comment from humpwhistle
Ah, a romantic tryst at a law office--how Danielle Steele of you!
A delightful story, well told.
Might I suggest you mix up your sentence structures a bit more.
I'm guessing 50% of your sentences begin with 'I' or 'He'. This is a minor nit, but maybe a bit more variety will spice up your story. Just a thought.
Peace, Lee
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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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Ah, a romantic tryst at a law office--how Danielle Steele of you!
A delightful story, well told.
Might I suggest you mix up your sentence structures a bit more.
I'm guessing 50% of your sentences begin with 'I' or 'He'. This is a minor nit, but maybe a bit more variety will spice up your story. Just a thought.
Peace, Lee
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Comment Written 21-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and critique. I respect your expect opinion and will edit that right now. Thank you very much!
All my best,
Sally
Comment from damommy
What a cute story about love is in the air. So now you have Catzilla III. How does Junior feel about that. Did he ever see Pumpkin again? Hopefully, Mr. Stockman had her spayed. Or should that be the male's responsibility? 8-)
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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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What a cute story about love is in the air. So now you have Catzilla III. How does Junior feel about that. Did he ever see Pumpkin again? Hopefully, Mr. Stockman had her spayed. Or should that be the male's responsibility? 8-)
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Comment Written 21-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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This was 1976, so money was low on my part. Mr. Stockman had many cats, thus my situation. Thank you for the excellent review and kind comments. I appreciate you stopping by.
Sal :+)
