Uncomfortably Numb
in response to an prompt on writing about numbnes2 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
Dragon poet... how clever of you to create a verse that uses repetitive first lines to make a strong point. I would mention that in the fifth stanza, second verse... there appears to be a typo. All the best,
Melissa
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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Dragon poet... how clever of you to create a verse that uses repetitive first lines to make a strong point. I would mention that in the fifth stanza, second verse... there appears to be a typo. All the best,
Melissa
Comment Written 21-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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Thanks for the review Melissa. i will check out the typo.
Joan
Comment from Carola Fernandez
Nice poem entry. I like the selection of rhyming words and the "I'm glad I am not numb" line. Simple words, but the simplicity goes well with your writing piece. Best of luck!
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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Nice poem entry. I like the selection of rhyming words and the "I'm glad I am not numb" line. Simple words, but the simplicity goes well with your writing piece. Best of luck!
Comment Written 20-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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Thank you for the nice review and for all the stars.
dragon
