Killed Criminal
Life in prison26 total reviews
Comment from Earl Corp
How fitting , that the one who terrorized women got a death sentence. For his crimes.i guess that's the definition of poetic justice. I enjoyed the story and especially the outcome immensely.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
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How fitting , that the one who terrorized women got a death sentence. For his crimes.i guess that's the definition of poetic justice. I enjoyed the story and especially the outcome immensely.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much! :)
Comment from 24chas
This was a good read, Raul1. I enjoyed the flow of it and the subject matter was interesting. I think you tell a good story. Nice job and keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
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This was a good read, Raul1. I enjoyed the flow of it and the subject matter was interesting. I think you tell a good story. Nice job and keep up the good work.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
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Thank you! :)
Comment from Rob Caudle
Your organization has gotten much better since that first story about ghosts. Good job on this one. As someone who watches a lot of crime drama, I can imagine the scene. I think your next goal should be to work on descriptions...a little bit of description goes a long way.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
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Your organization has gotten much better since that first story about ghosts. Good job on this one. As someone who watches a lot of crime drama, I can imagine the scene. I think your next goal should be to work on descriptions...a little bit of description goes a long way.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
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Thank you and thanks for the advice. I will follow your advice.
Comment from Wabigoon
Raul--
This sound a bit like Jeffrey Dahmer who was killed by other inmates for similar reasons. Despite the fact this is very short I feel you use too many words here and there, could have condensed a couple of the sentences.
Thanks
Wabigoon/Jeff
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2019
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Raul--
This sound a bit like Jeffrey Dahmer who was killed by other inmates for similar reasons. Despite the fact this is very short I feel you use too many words here and there, could have condensed a couple of the sentences.
Thanks
Wabigoon/Jeff
Comment Written 07-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from AdaJulie
I have always been curious about what it takes to be a horror novelist. I love the mystery, the intrigue and am cuious enough to peek but then I am chicken and run away from the scary parts. I do like your killer story. I would love for you to read the chapters of my mystery novel I am working on. You would probably think it needs a little horror added. I think you are a very creative writer and enjoy what I see. great job
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2019
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I have always been curious about what it takes to be a horror novelist. I love the mystery, the intrigue and am cuious enough to peek but then I am chicken and run away from the scary parts. I do like your killer story. I would love for you to read the chapters of my mystery novel I am working on. You would probably think it needs a little horror added. I think you are a very creative writer and enjoy what I see. great job
Comment Written 07-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2019
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Thank you!
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Yes, I will read your chapters from your mystery novel. Thanks for offering, my friend! :)
Comment from seaglass
Written well and no errors. It might be fiction but it's a scenario that happens often. It's ironic Jimmy that people who are in prison see another person's crime worse than their own, and deserving of death. However, I'm not a fan of serial killers either. Do you plan to develop this into a book?
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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Written well and no errors. It might be fiction but it's a scenario that happens often. It's ironic Jimmy that people who are in prison see another person's crime worse than their own, and deserving of death. However, I'm not a fan of serial killers either. Do you plan to develop this into a book?
Comment Written 06-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much! No, just a short story. :)
Comment from Jaye Bennett
I hope your character was incarcerated during his trial. I would assume so, since he was a serial killer. After five years, if I was on the jury, I would have found him guilty just for putting me through that. The author has written a sassy little tale. It is an interesting read. I would have liked for it to be longer. Good job.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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I hope your character was incarcerated during his trial. I would assume so, since he was a serial killer. After five years, if I was on the jury, I would have found him guilty just for putting me through that. The author has written a sassy little tale. It is an interesting read. I would have liked for it to be longer. Good job.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much!
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You're welcome.
Comment from lyenochka
Interesting that there is a greater sense of justice inside the prison walls than outside which took five years to sentence this serial killer! Seems like the other prisoners decided his fate. A lot is told in so few words!
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019
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Interesting that there is a greater sense of justice inside the prison walls than outside which took five years to sentence this serial killer! Seems like the other prisoners decided his fate. A lot is told in so few words!
Comment Written 04-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019
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Thank you! I am happy that you enjoyed my story.
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
That was pure justice in my opinion. I enjoyed the story. Nice piece of artwork, too, to accompany this writing. Keep writing and thank you for sharing!
Gale
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019
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That was pure justice in my opinion. I enjoyed the story. Nice piece of artwork, too, to accompany this writing. Keep writing and thank you for sharing!
Gale
Comment Written 04-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019
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Thank you! You're welcome!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a tragic story on two counts, firstly that someone should have the need to kill and secondly that the justice for this poor soul is to die at the hands others who are also guilty of killing, a sad story that unfortunately has the ring of truth, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019
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This is a tragic story on two counts, firstly that someone should have the need to kill and secondly that the justice for this poor soul is to die at the hands others who are also guilty of killing, a sad story that unfortunately has the ring of truth, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019
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Thank you!
