Chasing of the Wind.
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "Storm over Frank Mendez."Conflict between the Human Needs and the Divinity
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Comment from country ranch writer
Seems like the arrival of grandpa has ruffled a few feathers in the household and Rosie's mom is not to happy with grandpa being there.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
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Seems like the arrival of grandpa has ruffled a few feathers in the household and Rosie's mom is not to happy with grandpa being there.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
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Yes that is the gist of this chapter. It also depicts mindsets of generations; one young and liberal the other coming from the past century's power holders. Thanks for the comment. Hope you will read the novel .All the best.
Arun
Comment from Teresa Alford
Your story is relatable to life. It is written very well and has a good flow. It seems to be longer than many I read here on FS, but for the most part it holds ones attention. Good job. TA. ";-)
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
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Your story is relatable to life. It is written very well and has a good flow. It seems to be longer than many I read here on FS, but for the most part it holds ones attention. Good job. TA. ";-)
Comment Written 20-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
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Thanks for your comment and I am going to reorganize all the chapters to bring some sort of average length before submitting it for publication. I appreciate your encouraging grading. All the best.
Arun
