The Treasure Chest
A true story66 total reviews
Comment from poetwatch
Thank you for bringing a memory into my heart. This is a very unique poem I hope your friend was happy when she read it. Even if a tear ran down her face I feel she adored this poem. Very nice. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
Thank you for bringing a memory into my heart. This is a very unique poem I hope your friend was happy when she read it. Even if a tear ran down her face I feel she adored this poem. Very nice. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
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Thank you for your thoughtful review. I greatly appreciate your kind comments. My friend shed a few tears as well when he read this poem.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from nancy_e_davis
This is lovely Janet. It is sad when we lose our parents. I have been there. Bothe of mine. I was fortunate to have wonderful parents as well. Well done on the poem. A six for sure. Such emotion. xxx Nancy
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
This is lovely Janet. It is sad when we lose our parents. I have been there. Bothe of mine. I was fortunate to have wonderful parents as well. Well done on the poem. A six for sure. Such emotion. xxx Nancy
Comment Written 19-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
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Thank you Nancy for your thoughtful review and for the extra special sixth star. I always appreciate your comments my friend.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from jenintorre
I love this poem. You have written it so sensitively, it has brought tears to my eyes. Wonderful poem. Good luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
I love this poem. You have written it so sensitively, it has brought tears to my eyes. Wonderful poem. Good luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
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Thank you Jen for your thoughtful review and the extra special sixth star. I greatly appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from His Grayness
I really enjoyed this very rare and delightful story, so very well presented in all dimensions. I have no suggestions to offer this fine author and certainly wish to express my sincere thanks for a very excellent work indeed! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
I really enjoyed this very rare and delightful story, so very well presented in all dimensions. I have no suggestions to offer this fine author and certainly wish to express my sincere thanks for a very excellent work indeed! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment Written 19-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
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Thank you Vance for your thoughtful review and the extra special sixth star. I greatly appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
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My delight entirely thanks to you Janet! HIS GRAYESS; Vance
Comment from Mastery
I wish now that I had saved a six for you, Janet. This is such a lovely story. One can almost picture you or whoever this story belongs to, going through the letters in that box and shedding a tea with pent up joy for the good times. Bless you, my friend. Bob
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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
I wish now that I had saved a six for you, Janet. This is such a lovely story. One can almost picture you or whoever this story belongs to, going through the letters in that box and shedding a tea with pent up joy for the good times. Bless you, my friend. Bob
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Comment Written 19-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
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Thank you Bob for your thoughtful review and the virtual sixth star is so thoughtful as well. I greatly appreciate your kind comments my friend.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from royowen
The best gift someone can offer another, is the gift that God gave you, to read their lives and put it into verse Janet. Beautifully and sensitively written, the poem flows so well, and it stands in memorial to your friend's life and testimony of love. Written in pentametric quatrains in in abcb rhyming and great flow, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
The best gift someone can offer another, is the gift that God gave you, to read their lives and put it into verse Janet. Beautifully and sensitively written, the poem flows so well, and it stands in memorial to your friend's life and testimony of love. Written in pentametric quatrains in in abcb rhyming and great flow, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 19-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
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Thank you dear Roy for your thoughtful review and the extra special sixth star. I always appreciate your encouraging comments. This poem was a labor of love to my friend for her loss.
Blessings
Janet
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Did you know Douglss Paul? He was prominent a season or so ago, could you pray for him, he has terminal bone cancer? Bless you Janet.
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I do remember his name Roy and will be pleased to lift him up in prayer. Thank you for asking.
Blessings to you
Janet
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Bless you Janet.