The Treasure Chest
A true story66 total reviews
Comment from susand3022
Hi JMF, This is a really beautiful poem. The progression is very nice, I love the way the subject goes in and finds the box of letters and gets to read about the lives of her parents. I would love to be able to do that!
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
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Hi JMF, This is a really beautiful poem. The progression is very nice, I love the way the subject goes in and finds the box of letters and gets to read about the lives of her parents. I would love to be able to do that!
Comment Written 20-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
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Thank you Susan or your thoughtful review. I greatly appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh, what an incredibly touching story, and how beautifully you have told it in this wonderfully metered poem. Your friend must be extremely pleased. I know I would be, and it's aptly named too, for more than the reason stated -- a treasure!
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
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Oh, what an incredibly touching story, and how beautifully you have told it in this wonderfully metered poem. Your friend must be extremely pleased. I know I would be, and it's aptly named too, for more than the reason stated -- a treasure!
Comment Written 19-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
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Thank you for your thoughtful review. I greatly appreciate your kind comments. My friend was delighted. We have been a great support to each other over the years.
Blessings
Janet
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You're very welcome.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"The Treasure Chest", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece.
This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me, this is definitely a six. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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"The Treasure Chest", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece.
This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me, this is definitely a six. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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Thank you duchess for your thoughtful and encouraging review and that extra special sixth star. I always appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
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Dear Janet as always, you're more than welcome.
You definitely deserved the sixth star!
Take care and God bless you,
the Duchess !(-_-)!
Comment from Gloria ....
And what a heartfelt story it is. Your lyrical metre and fine rhymes bring the joy of the adopted child to light through a progression of imagery and physicality.
Great luck to you with the Contest Committee.
Gloria
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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And what a heartfelt story it is. Your lyrical metre and fine rhymes bring the joy of the adopted child to light through a progression of imagery and physicality.
Great luck to you with the Contest Committee.
Gloria
Comment Written 19-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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Thank you Gloria for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I always appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from kiwijenny
What a wonderful story. You must be a true friend for her to share like this. Beautiful..
If they found my husband's poems people would be so touched. God is so good.
Well penned and I love the house. It's my favorite style
God bless
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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What a wonderful story. You must be a true friend for her to share like this. Beautiful..
If they found my husband's poems people would be so touched. God is so good.
Well penned and I love the house. It's my favorite style
God bless
Comment Written 19-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate you kind comments. I hope your husbands poems are found. They should be shared.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Gert sherwood
Thank you for sharing a true story that a friend told you about how a until she spayed a box with ribbons blue. And the box letters that her dad wrote
Gert
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
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Thank you for sharing a true story that a friend told you about how a until she spayed a box with ribbons blue. And the box letters that her dad wrote
Gert
Comment Written 19-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
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Thank you Gert for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Ulla
And what a lovely story. Your friend must be over the moon that you're writing such an heartfelt story about her life with her loving adoptive parents. It's a beautiful poem. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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And what a lovely story. Your friend must be over the moon that you're writing such an heartfelt story about her life with her loving adoptive parents. It's a beautiful poem. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 19-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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Thank you Ulla for your thoughtful and encouraging review. My friend was really pleased. We shed more than a few tears together.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Ima L. Ami
This is an amazing sonnet that brought tears to my eyes. What a blessing to find such a treasure during such a sad time. I hope that when the time comes, my boys find my writings and feel the same love. Thank you so much for putting this lovely story into such a beautiful poem and sharing it with us.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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This is an amazing sonnet that brought tears to my eyes. What a blessing to find such a treasure during such a sad time. I hope that when the time comes, my boys find my writings and feel the same love. Thank you so much for putting this lovely story into such a beautiful poem and sharing it with us.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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Thank you Ima for your thoughtful and encouraging review and that extra special sixth star. I greatly appreciate your kind comments. I hope your boys (and mine) find our writings.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from lyenochka
Such a beautiful story! And well told in your abcb rhyming quatrains. The best part is that the treasure found isn't monetary and can never be lost but be passed on forever since it's love.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
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Such a beautiful story! And well told in your abcb rhyming quatrains. The best part is that the treasure found isn't monetary and can never be lost but be passed on forever since it's love.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I agree, the best treasure isn't found in money.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from zanya
It's an inspiring life story in a poem filled with both the joys and sorrows of living - but most especially of overcoming life's hurdles enabled by their 'steadfast love'
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
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It's an inspiring life story in a poem filled with both the joys and sorrows of living - but most especially of overcoming life's hurdles enabled by their 'steadfast love'
Comment Written 19-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
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Thank you zanya for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
