Wild Geese Journey .
Wild Geese Journey.2 total reviews
Comment from The Cowboy Poet
Beautiful imagery is constructed and presented all through the poem. Yes, it does make me want to go to the park and watch the geese take off in flight. Even the movement you have created with your words mimics the flight of the geese. Truly nicely done. The only criticism I might offer is the background and your words don't have enough contrast making it hard to read. Cowboy
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2019
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Beautiful imagery is constructed and presented all through the poem. Yes, it does make me want to go to the park and watch the geese take off in flight. Even the movement you have created with your words mimics the flight of the geese. Truly nicely done. The only criticism I might offer is the background and your words don't have enough contrast making it hard to read. Cowboy
Comment Written 18-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2019
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Thank You. I'll check that.
Comment from Six-Star Writer
Nice flow--like geese moving south. Very nice symmetry. Good imagery. My only wish is that I could be joining tthe geese for sunnier climes. Honk honk.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2019
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Nice flow--like geese moving south. Very nice symmetry. Good imagery. My only wish is that I could be joining tthe geese for sunnier climes. Honk honk.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2019
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As you say, Honk Honk. Thank You for the nice review.
