Haiku (dressed for the spring ball)
A Haiku entry13 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written haiku about the beautiful flower dressed in shades of peach and purple. It is a unique colored flower that definitely cathes the eye.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2019
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A very well-written haiku about the beautiful flower dressed in shades of peach and purple. It is a unique colored flower that definitely cathes the eye.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2019
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So glad you enjoyed my haiku on the iris, one of my favorite flowers!
Comment from Sugarray77
June.... this is a majestic verse that you have paired with an amazing photograph. I love it! It is a perfect entry for the Haiku contest. Good job, and good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2019
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June.... this is a majestic verse that you have paired with an amazing photograph. I love it! It is a perfect entry for the Haiku contest. Good job, and good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 19-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2019
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Thank you! So glad you enjoyed my haiku on the iris, one of my favorite flowers!
Comment from Aussie
How wonderful is our God? Man can't match the Master Painter. There is so much beauty growing in our gardens. Some appreciate, some just walk on by. I loved your contest entry for the haiku poetry. Wishing you well with your lovely entry.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2019
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How wonderful is our God? Man can't match the Master Painter. There is so much beauty growing in our gardens. Some appreciate, some just walk on by. I loved your contest entry for the haiku poetry. Wishing you well with your lovely entry.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2019
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So glad you enjoyed my haiku on the iris, one of my favorite flowers!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made effective use of every syllable in this VERY lovely haiku.
The colorful, lively image is enhanced by personification and metaphor.
A breath of fresh air in winter
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2019
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You have made effective use of every syllable in this VERY lovely haiku.
The colorful, lively image is enhanced by personification and metaphor.
A breath of fresh air in winter
Comment Written 19-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2019
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So glad you enjoyed my haiku on the iris, one of my favorite flowers!
Comment from Miss Sherry
I love haiku and you have done splendidly with this. Such pretty artwork...flower tall and stately. Just a few words that tell a whole story. You have done a great job here!!
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2019
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I love haiku and you have done splendidly with this. Such pretty artwork...flower tall and stately. Just a few words that tell a whole story. You have done a great job here!!
Comment Written 18-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2019
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So glad you enjoyed my haiku on the iris, one of my favorite flowers!
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It was a great haiku - Iris are gorgeous flowers.
Comment from Donka Kristeva
That stirs up a desire for Spring beauty... Elegant and rich in image and colour haiku. Splendid last line, and art work so appropriate.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2019
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That stirs up a desire for Spring beauty... Elegant and rich in image and colour haiku. Splendid last line, and art work so appropriate.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2019
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So glad you enjoyed my haiku on the iris, one of my favorite flowers!
Comment from kiwijenny
Beautiful...floral royalty indeed...is this a bearded iris?
It is absolutely stunning and so is your haiku. I love it..
Good luck with the competition
God bless
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2019
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Beautiful...floral royalty indeed...is this a bearded iris?
It is absolutely stunning and so is your haiku. I love it..
Good luck with the competition
God bless
Comment Written 18-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2019
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So glad you enjoyed my haiku on the iris, one of my favorite flowers!
Comment from Ms. Snyder
Your satori is awesome!!! I love it! Good luck in your contest I think you did a fabulous job of writing a Haiku. The picture of the flower is beautiful and the colors are so vibrant and match so well with the description in your Haiku. Great job!
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2019
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Your satori is awesome!!! I love it! Good luck in your contest I think you did a fabulous job of writing a Haiku. The picture of the flower is beautiful and the colors are so vibrant and match so well with the description in your Haiku. Great job!
Comment Written 18-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2019
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So glad you enjoyed my haiku on the iris, one of my favorite flowers!
Comment from Joan E.
I relished your equating the flower's ruffles to a royal dress. Your bits of alliteration and the splendid artwork selection add to the intensity of the description. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2019
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I relished your equating the flower's ruffles to a royal dress. Your bits of alliteration and the splendid artwork selection add to the intensity of the description. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 18-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2019
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So glad you enjoyed my haiku on the iris, one of my favorite flowers!
Comment from Mark D. R.
Wow, now I can review my go to style verse - either 5-7-5 or now your Haiku!
Wonderful imagery in both this verse and photo - so delicate!
You may not like that I criticize the use of this script font. It is not a quick read for anyone, especially those FS reviewers with any visual acuity issue.
I recognize that this specific Haiku really lends itself to this type of font. I accept your thinking process in doing so. My suggestion is to keep 'floral' as your only script word. Maybe change your script font to a standard italic font.
Mark
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2019
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Wow, now I can review my go to style verse - either 5-7-5 or now your Haiku!
Wonderful imagery in both this verse and photo - so delicate!
You may not like that I criticize the use of this script font. It is not a quick read for anyone, especially those FS reviewers with any visual acuity issue.
I recognize that this specific Haiku really lends itself to this type of font. I accept your thinking process in doing so. My suggestion is to keep 'floral' as your only script word. Maybe change your script font to a standard italic font.
Mark
Comment Written 18-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2019
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So glad you enjoyed my haiku on the iris, one of my favorite flowers! And I hear you about the font being a little difficult to read at times. Was thinking about the delicate topic. Will think about the suggestion to highlight floral with script. And thanks for the generous stars!
