Comment from Roxanna Andrews

Excellent

The bible says He collects our tears. I wonder how huge a container it must be. But then He will wipe them all away. When we meet Him face to face, we will never have need to cry again. What a great day! Well done, Pat. Rox

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2019

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Comment from Miss Sherry

Excellent

What a lovely and spiritual poem. He knows our sorrows and temptations, our misdeeds and our kindness. I shall be so happy to see His face and tell Him how I love Him for all he has done for me!

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2019

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You are most welcome, dear Poet.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Thank you for reminding us of the Lord's comfort and that He is the One Who paid for our sins and that made it possible for us to have that peace with God. Hope you are fully recovered from your cold, Patricia!

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2019

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Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Thank you for sharing your spiritual poem of gratitude. I admired your rhymes and the parallel picture you selected. Here's to a restful weekend- Joan

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2019

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Comment from Treischel

Excellent

A lovely spiritual poem that tells about how Jesus loves us all, even through the tears, a comforting thought to those who suffer in any way. Nicely presented in abab rhymed quatrains closed with a rhymed couplet. Well said.

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2019

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Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A warm and loving write Patricia, filled with hope that our tears will be dried by our faith. You have a floating (d) that needs removing. I enjoyed your words, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2019

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Comment from judiverse

Excellent

It's reassuring to know that Jesus is there to offer comfort in times of stress and remove our fears. As you state in your last stanza, we can thank him for His grace. Excellent work with your rhyme. Bleed is present tense, so you need bled. A very reassuring post. judi

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2019

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You're very welcome. judi

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Good

Your concise, reverent spiritual poem is moving and accurately speaks of
how He loves us. Why the 4? (1) line 3 typo--"bleed" should be "bled" and
(2) "remove"--wrong verb form/tense (line 8).


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 Comment Written 18-Jan-2019

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Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

A beautiful write here with a spiritual reassurance that all should look to when those tears do want to fall -- thank you so very much for sharing! :) :)

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2019

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Comment from KyColonel Randal

Excellent

Thank you for sharing. Robert Frost once said "Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words." It would seem to me this continues to ring true. This is an interesting illustration you've chosen; I feel like I've seen it before. I think the fake tears take away from the serious nature of the poem and have a comical effect.

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2019

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