Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

Yes, you have to wonder where some of the names for groups of animals originated. This is a cute little flash fiction story Maria, even in nature perfection is often required.I liked the reference to her father, breaking hearts wherever he went. I immediately thought of the Prince that got turned into a frog, enjoyed this one
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2019

Thanks so much for reading, Valda. Have a lovely day.

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Oh dear, Maria Jose. So little Florence was not pretty enough so she ended up living with the toads. Bullying is an awful thing. I do feel for her. Great entry to the contest.. Good luck. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019

Thanks for reading, Ulla. Have a nice Sunday.

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

Oh, poor little frog!!
Yes, leaving the army is an excellent choice!
She'll certainly stand out amongst the toads!
Love this, so cute and whimsical!
Good luck in the contest!
Blessings...

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2019

Thanks so much. Take care.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

This is a fun contest entry, Maria. I enjoyed reading it. The picture is a good pairing with your words. By your title, I did not expect this to turn out as it did. But it works. Those kind of surprises keep readers' interest. Good job and thanks for sharing. Best wishes. Jan

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2019

Thanks for reading, Jan.

Comment from aryr

Excellent

Good luck in the 100 word writing contest Maria. This was well done, well planned and created in an interesting choice of words. I appreciated your narrative in that I knew about owls and crows but did not know about frogs and toads. I think your picture choice was fantastic- no warts visible (smile).

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2019

Thanks so much for your fun review, Aryr.

reply by aryr on 19-Jan-2019

You are so welcome Maria

Comment from damommy

Excellent

Poor Florence. It's nice she found a place to be accepted. Even in the animal world, prejudice and bullying exists. You've a good point with the cute story.

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2019

Thanks for reading, Yvonne. Take care.

Comment from tbacha58

Excellent

That picture and the comparison put in words is great for us human beings to read and value how we should plan to live in another forthcoming beautiful tomorrow., and forget all the bad happening we through each day. Terry xoxo

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2019

Thanks for reading, Terry. Take care.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Maria, This is a very well written 100 word short story. You used very good descriptive words about the little frog that ended up wanting to live with the toads. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. I saw no errors or spag. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2019

Thanks so much, Teri. Take care.

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Hello Maria!
Well, not only humorous, but instructional as well! I had no idea that a group of frogs = an army or, for that matter, a group of toads = a knot! But I also never knew that frogs bullied other frogs = how rude! :)
Well, Florence certainly has a mind of her own! And good for her!

Thank you for sharing!
diane

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2019

Thanks so much for your fun review.

Comment from Jake P.

Excellent

Very well written. The self-image of the frog reflects well with the body images adolescents focus on in themselves and others.

Good description eyes and skin, and how she perceived of herself in comparison with her father and mother.
Good solution to her problem at the end.

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2019

Thanks for reading, Jake.