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The Moment

I didn't have too many of these moments, too shy.

6 total reviews 
Comment from KatyM
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This is a cute picture! Good luck on the contest. Reminds me when my best friend dated a guy I had just stopped dating. lol She took the ring he gave her with is initial on it and threw it in the lake! lol take care, katy

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
    I'm sorry for not answering sooner, but the flu has been visiting. Many thanks for the kind words and best wishes. I need to write more flash.

    Have a great day and God bless.
    mike
Comment from Sally Law
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A hard thing to do, but you did it. These dribble flash fictions of 50 words are the hardest. You did a great job here, Papa Mike!
All my best to you and in the contest,
Sal

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
    I'm sorry for not answering, but the flu has been visiting. Many thanks for the kind words and best wishes. I need to write more flash.

    Have a great day and God bless.
    mike
reply by Sally Law on 20-Jan-2019
    Read my poem, ?Get Well.? So many are sick and I wrote it to cheer. Sal
Comment from Miranda Langston
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hahahahaha :D this is soooo cute. i like the line about the little kid's ego being reinflated :D this is an adorable Dribble flash fiction. keep writing, man :)

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
    I'm sorry for not answering, the flu has been visiting. Many thanks for the kind words and best wishes. I need to write more flash.

    Have a great day and God bless.
    mike
Comment from meeshu
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this is so cute, and just the way I remember it. always, some one better comes along to pick you up from the scrapheap. good work, Papa...............meeshu

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
    I'm sorry for not answering sooner but the flu has been visiting. Many thanks for the kind words and best wishes. I need to write more flash.

    Have a great day and God bless.
    mike
Comment from tfawcus
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On the rebound! How these ladies toy with our hearts, tweaking the strings. Such beautiful music until they go out of tune. This is an original entry for the contest. Good luck with it!

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
    I'm sorry for not answering sooner but the flu has been visiting. Many thanks for the kind words and best wishes. I need to write more flash.

    Have a great day and God bless.
    mike
Comment from country ranch writer
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Win some lose some in the dating game when one is young so many fish in the pond to choose from.she dumped him but there was another right handy to take her place.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
    I'm sorry for not answering but the flu has been visiting. Many thanks for the kind words and best wishes. I need to write more flash.

    Have a great day and God bless.
    mike