Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

Has the crow all wound up for his pitching venue he is using every bit of his know how to use his words and make a home run in the process.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2019

Thank you for your kind review and for sharing your thoughts, Country Ranch Writer.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

reply by country ranch writer on 18-Jan-2019

smiles

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This tyburn, Crowd Goes Wild, has the proper structure and and really brings the spirit into this challenge. I feel the stadium and the fans disenchantment.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2019

Thank you for your kind comments in review of my poem, Bill. I appreciate your time to read and share your response.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

If either of the clubs I take challenges from yells for a Tyburn, I think I shall set it out. Looks like a unique application poem to me, not for casual perusal. That said, I suspect this is an excellent example.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2019

Thanks so much, LIJ RED, for taking the time to read and write a review for my poem. This is quite a challenging form, so I'm pleased you enjoyed it. I appreciate your kind comments.
Smiles
Karyn :-)

Comment from susand3022

Excellent

Hello Author! This was fun, funny and I loved the word choices you used! You made me laugh on one of "those" days... you know the ones we all love so well! Thanks for the giggle today!

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2019

Thanks so much, Susan, for taking the time to read and write a review for my poem. This is quite a challenging form, so I'm pleased you enjoyed it. I appreciate your kind comments, and your smile is the best compliment!
Smiles
Karyn :-)

Comment from The Cowboy Poet

Excellent

This is an unusual style, but you handled it well. Being a former coach and lifelong sports fan, I can identify with the sounds and visual images you have created. Nicely done. Cowboy

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2019

Thanks so much, Cowboy, for taking the time to read and write a review for my poem. This is quite a challenging form, so I'm pleased you enjoyed it. I appreciate your kind comments. Thank you!
Smiles
Karyn :-)

Comment from Louise Michelle

Excellent

Hm...this is a new poetry style to me. I enjoyed reading it and I liked your presentation.

Cute picture and snappy words grabbed my attention. Lou

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2019

Thank you for your kind review for my poem, Lou. It's a challenging form, so I appreciate your comments.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from Cindy McIntyre

Excellent

What a fun topic of choice for this unique poetic style. Your incorporated all the right syllables and rhymes for each line. I hope you do well in the contest. Good luck.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2019

Thanks for your kind review and comments for my poem, Cindy. I appreciate your taking the time to read and share your comments. Thanks for reading!
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from BigPoppaJrock

Excellent

Great poem, love the subject, I am huge baseball fan. Very well written and fit the style of poetry very well. Thanks for sharing and good luck in your contest.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2019

Thanks so much, BigPoppaJrock, for taking the time to read and write a review for my poem. This is quite a challenging form, so I'm pleased you enjoyed it. I appreciate your kind comments.Pitchers and catchers report to spring training in about a month!
Smiles
Karyn :-)

Comment from harmony13

Excellent

Excellent Poem! The author's words are creative,
interesting and descriptive. The author did a
great job in creating this 6 line poem. The artwork
is perfect and compliments the poem well.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2019

Thank you for your great comments for my poem, Harmony. I appreciate your taking the time to read and write a review, and I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Tyburn poetry is not as easy to compose as one might believe.
First of all, the first four one syllable lines must rhyme and must be descriptive words.
The last two lines must also rhyme and incorporate the first, second, third and fourth lines as the 5th through 8th syllables, expanding upon the four one-syllable descriptive words.
Not an easy feat to accomplish without a bit of thought.
But you managed to do so quite well here with your Tyburn depicting one aspect of America's favorite past-time.
Best of luck!

~Dean

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2019

Thanks so much, Dean, for taking the time to read and write a review for my poem. This is quite a challenging form, so I'm pleased you enjoyed it. I appreciate your kind comments, and I like your pitcher.
Smiles
Karyn :-)