Puncturing Reality
Viewing comments for Chapter 57 "Hell on Earth Damn It to Shame!"My thoughts on this "Ago Old Subject."
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Comment from Earl Corp
I don't know how World War III will be fought, but World War will be fought with sticks and stones-- Alber Einstein. I think that is kind of where you were heading with this poem.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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I don't know how World War III will be fought, but World War will be fought with sticks and stones-- Alber Einstein. I think that is kind of where you were heading with this poem.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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Back to Prehistoric Times.
Thanks Earl.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from LovnPeace
The last stanza, second line- it should read the United States of America and our ally's versus (Middle)-you have Middlr. We are at the end and without God's love in us we do all the things you list IMHO. Well said. Blessings, Barbara
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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The last stanza, second line- it should read the United States of America and our ally's versus (Middle)-you have Middlr. We are at the end and without God's love in us we do all the things you list IMHO. Well said. Blessings, Barbara
Comment Written 15-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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Thanks for this review and for stopping by I actually caught quite a few grammar errors that needed. Corrections and repositioning this was actually created in the Hilton on Connecticut Avenue in Washington DC 2006 we were requested to bring in the peace poem to go to the White House which I forgot so there was two young gentlemen promoting their book borrowed three markers does parchment paper laid out over many tables and I took the center of the table and I wrote it out in pain and also Drew in magic marker the red and the black represented nine-one-one in the plane flying into twin towers and More in any negative items then I took a picture my camera brought the markers back and I was given Praise by the two young gentleman who I borrowed them from me so just keep doing what you're doing I thought I had lost that picture when I went through airport security in the X-rays I thought it destroyed it that was in the camera but it was in there I had to use a magnifying glass and this is what I came up with have a blessed day thanks for the review dr. Ricky 1024 due to the injuries in my left hand there's a poem story about that on there I am and will have problems editing especially things like that there will be running sending Park possible grammar issues
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I sympathize Ricky. I am not a great writer and even worse editor and speller. I am getting better though. Hang in there. I have learned so much on this site. Blessings.
