Night Diamonds
contest entry36 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
This is so lovely and captures the frostiness and purity of a snowfall shining in the night streetlights. I love the short, but intense message that this one gives. Well done.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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This is so lovely and captures the frostiness and purity of a snowfall shining in the night streetlights. I love the short, but intense message that this one gives. Well done.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much for your kind review and comments for my poem, Sugarray, I'm delighted you enjoyed the imagery, and I appreciate your encouraging response.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment from Rickie1
Karyn
I love fewer words that say a lot like you have. I walk my dog at night and when the moon is full and snow covers the ground I don't need a flashlight. I love the reflection of the snow but the picture doesn't make me think of ice. It's a beautiful picture. Well done.
Rickie
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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Karyn
I love fewer words that say a lot like you have. I walk my dog at night and when the moon is full and snow covers the ground I don't need a flashlight. I love the reflection of the snow but the picture doesn't make me think of ice. It's a beautiful picture. Well done.
Rickie
Comment Written 16-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much, Rickie, for this kind review and for sharing your thoughts. I love walking at night with the sparkling snow putting on a light show. I appreciate your encouraging response.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment from Brigitte Elko
This is beautiful wording and picturesque. Well written and a concise concept in a few words. Well done. This was a worthy competion.
Blessings,
Brigitte
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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This is beautiful wording and picturesque. Well written and a concise concept in a few words. Well done. This was a worthy competion.
Blessings,
Brigitte
Comment Written 16-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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I appreciate your kind review and for taking the time to read and share your comments, Brigitte. Thank you so much for your kind response, and I'm delighted you enjoyed the poem. Thank you.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Karyn,
Simply stunning. Your 2/5/2 poetic offering speaks volumes of winter's pristine beauty. Your chosen artwork truly resonates with me as it reflects the entrance to our subdivision here in northrern Michigan. We just had an ice storm last evening, and our trees looks just as reflected in your well-crafted poem.
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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Hello Karyn,
Simply stunning. Your 2/5/2 poetic offering speaks volumes of winter's pristine beauty. Your chosen artwork truly resonates with me as it reflects the entrance to our subdivision here in northrern Michigan. We just had an ice storm last evening, and our trees looks just as reflected in your well-crafted poem.
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 16-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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Hi Diane! Thank you so much for this wonderful review and your kind, encouraging comments. I love the beauty of the winter season and find it so inspiring to write about it. Thank you for your kind response, and please accept my congratulations for your deserving win in this contest.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment from zanya
Yes these poetic lines capture the sheer magic of the 'night's snowfall' under the light of the moon - and a superb choice of adjective to conclude - lovely pic
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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Yes these poetic lines capture the sheer magic of the 'night's snowfall' under the light of the moon - and a superb choice of adjective to conclude - lovely pic
Comment Written 16-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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Thank you for your kind review and comments for my poem, zanya. I truly appreciate your taking the time to read and share your encouraging thoughts.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment from estory
It's hard to capture anything in such a small space, but your poem does have that nice balance and the sparkling imagery, the oriental nature imagery. That word pristine serves as the epiphany moment. It is an image of clarity, of purity, that seems born of the moonlight and the snowfall. The only thing missing is a human element. An epiphany of the human experience of purity or lack thereof. But maybe your poem soars over our mortal heads a bit. Nice job with a really short poem estory
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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It's hard to capture anything in such a small space, but your poem does have that nice balance and the sparkling imagery, the oriental nature imagery. That word pristine serves as the epiphany moment. It is an image of clarity, of purity, that seems born of the moonlight and the snowfall. The only thing missing is a human element. An epiphany of the human experience of purity or lack thereof. But maybe your poem soars over our mortal heads a bit. Nice job with a really short poem estory
Comment Written 16-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much, estory, for your awesome review and comments for my poem. I truly appreciate your encouraging response, and I'm delighted you enjoyed the imagery. The human element to me, was looking out my bay window and seeing such sparkling undisturbed snow. It was an incredible sight. Thanks so much!
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
This is a lovely poem, and the picture you found pairs beautifully with it. Your poem "captures" the essence of the picture so well. In a mere 9 syllables, your poem speaks volumes. Syllable count for each line is spot on. Best wishes for the contest with this gem of a poem.
Cheers,
Connie
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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This is a lovely poem, and the picture you found pairs beautifully with it. Your poem "captures" the essence of the picture so well. In a mere 9 syllables, your poem speaks volumes. Syllable count for each line is spot on. Best wishes for the contest with this gem of a poem.
Cheers,
Connie
Comment Written 16-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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Connie, I truly appreciate your kind review and lovely comments for my poem. I'm delighted you enjoyed the imagery, and thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment from Joy Graham
Hello there,
You have captured the beauty of this winter scene :) Winter has some good moments apart from being freezing cold and giving people frostbite.
You have fine syllables as required by the contest requirements. I love the picture. I love that your title adds the diamonds to the overall description.
Best wishes in the contest.
Joy xx
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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Hello there,
You have captured the beauty of this winter scene :) Winter has some good moments apart from being freezing cold and giving people frostbite.
You have fine syllables as required by the contest requirements. I love the picture. I love that your title adds the diamonds to the overall description.
Best wishes in the contest.
Joy xx
Comment Written 16-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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Hi Joy. Thank you for your kind review and encouraging comments for my poem. It was such a beautiful sight and I'm glad you enjoyed the imagery.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment from Donka Kristeva
Enchanting! You have created a marvel with very few words. The winter scene in word and art work is like one taken our of a fairy tale.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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Enchanting! You have created a marvel with very few words. The winter scene in word and art work is like one taken our of a fairy tale.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much for this awesome review for my poem, Donka. Ilove your thought that it was like a fairy tale and enchanting. I appreciate your kind words.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment from rhonnie69
HELLO INDIANAIRISH: I like your posting here in that it expresses the original purity of freshly fallen snow in a winter's wonderland. And you've done it in a brief, clear, and in a to the point way. With just three lines and five words you present your message to your reader. Good work, poet. Thank you for sharing. God bless you and yours. Cordially: rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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HELLO INDIANAIRISH: I like your posting here in that it expresses the original purity of freshly fallen snow in a winter's wonderland. And you've done it in a brief, clear, and in a to the point way. With just three lines and five words you present your message to your reader. Good work, poet. Thank you for sharing. God bless you and yours. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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Thank you, rhonnie, for your great review and for taking the time to read and share your thoughts. I appreciate your kind response.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
