The Pier
the beach at sunset3 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-5-2 syllable poem, The Pier, has the proper formatting and suggests that the edifice upon which we walk may lead further than we can know.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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This 2-5-2 syllable poem, The Pier, has the proper formatting and suggests that the edifice upon which we walk may lead further than we can know.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much for reading and responding.
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
What a beautiful topic to write about. Your photo is very inviting--sunset at the beach! Your 2-5-2 is nicely formatted and written. I hope you do well in the upcoming contest. Good luck.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2019
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What a beautiful topic to write about. Your photo is very inviting--sunset at the beach! Your 2-5-2 is nicely formatted and written. I hope you do well in the upcoming contest. Good luck.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2019
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Thanks so much for reading and responding to my 9 syllables!!! I do appreciate your comments.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
and the use of one continuous
thought is effective.
-The imagery is good with
the pier, gulf, and sun.
-The use of stretch as your
verb is a good choice, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2019
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-Very nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
and the use of one continuous
thought is effective.
-The imagery is good with
the pier, gulf, and sun.
-The use of stretch as your
verb is a good choice, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2019
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Thank you for reading and responding to my 2-5-2! I appreciate your comments.
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You are welcome.
