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Jesus

5.7.5. poem

3 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 5-7-5, Jesus, has the proper formatting and defines Jesus in this reduced, but effective way: Peace, love, and a connection to eternity.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
    Yes.Thank You for the nice review.
Comment from dragonpoet
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This poem is short and to the point. Jesus led with love like all people should.
If some leaders should learn this, we would have a more peaceful world.

Good luck and keep writing

dragonpoet

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 13-Jan-2019
    Thank You.I could use some luck.
reply by dragonpoet on 13-Jan-2019
    No problem. Can't we all.
    dp
Comment from kahpot
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A wonderful 5-7-5 poem and it is a short description of something mighty and you have said it excellently in this short poem, very well written and best wishes for your contest****KAHPOT

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 13-Jan-2019
    Thank You.